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Array ( [sid] => 54359 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => I Had A Dream [time] => 2004-07-01 09:52:16 [hometext] => Don't you just hate it when your dreams seem so real.... sometimes it is a relief to wake up. [bodytext] => I had a dream the other night,
It made me hold onto you so tight,
I dreamt that you loved another,
You left me naked with no cover.

I know that it was just a dream,
But it was powerful, made my heart scream,
Since that night I’ve loved you more,
Than I thought possible before.

It scared me so much,
To think I’d never again feel your touch,
I won’t ever take you for granted,
Even though I know the love is planted.

If you & me went separate ways,
I’d sob my heart out for the rest of my days,
I love you & I always will,
Of your love I’ve not yet had my fill.

I never want to experience that again,
Although unreal it caused me pain,
The thought of you not by my side,
Hurt me so deep down inside.

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I Had A Dream

Contributed by pixie on Thursday, 1st July 2004 @ 09:52:16 AM in AEST
Topic: DreamsandWishes

I had a dream the other night,
It made me hold onto you so tight,
I dreamt that you loved another,
You left me naked with no cover.

I know that it was just a dream,
But it was powerful, made my heart scream,
Since that night I’ve loved you more,
Than I thought possible before.

It scared me so much,
To think I’d never again feel your touch,
I won’t ever take you for granted,
Even though I know the love is planted.

If you & me went separate ways,
I’d sob my heart out for the rest of my days,
I love you & I always will,
Of your love I’ve not yet had my fill.

I never want to experience that again,
Although unreal it caused me pain,
The thought of you not by my side,
Hurt me so deep down inside.

Copyright Â© pixie ... [ 2004-07-01 09:52:16]
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Re: I Had A Dream (User Rating: 1 )
by LovingWhispers on Thursday, 1st July 2004 @ 10:03:27 AM AEST
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You are indeed fortunate enough to realise the need for appreciation before it is too late.Some sadly do not.

I believe that what we hold in our hands we should hold well.For trying to reach for other things,never noticing the worth of what we already have can have us fumble and lose all.

Great piece!!
Dreams are awakenings .

LW

Re: I Had A Dream (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Thursday, 1st July 2004 @ 11:57:05 AM AEST
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This dream was a great revelation for you. It made you realize how important he is in your life. Treasure him always, Krissy.

I hate dreams like this because I am so tired when I wake up from fighting myself in them.

Hugs,
Rita

Re: I Had A Dream (User Rating: 1 )
by MDodgen on Thursday, 1st July 2004 @ 12:00:42 PM AEST
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I never want to experience that again,
Although unreal it caused me pain,
The thought of you not by my side,
Hurt me so deep down inside.

that pain upon waking is just so real. good job expressing it. 4 stars

Re: I Had A Dream (User Rating: 1 )
by ladyfawn on Thursday, 1st July 2004 @ 12:24:43 PM AEST
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ouch.

Re: I Had A Dream (User Rating: 1 )
by kammie on Thursday, 1st July 2004 @ 01:02:45 PM AEST
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pixie,
your poems are cool and they are soooo meaningful i wish i could write like that !!
it was wonderful to read

from kammie xx

Re: I Had A Dream (User Rating: 1 )
by monkey on Thursday, 1st July 2004 @ 04:14:32 PM AEST
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Pixie ~
Great write. I loved it. Keep writing!
¤ Monkey ¤

Re: I Had A Dream (User Rating: 1 )
by kidpoet_213 on Thursday, 1st July 2004 @ 04:35:40 PM AEST
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Pixie...
This would have been one of those dream for me that I would wake up remembering every detail of... and it would have hurt me... great poem... love the way u showed the emotions..
keep writing
~Donna~

Re: I Had A Dream (User Rating: 1 )
by evilfairy on Thursday, 1st July 2004 @ 07:25:51 PM AEST
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Loved this pixie

everything about the structure of the poem was superb, and words were great too - you really got the feeling across. :)

Re: I Had A Dream (User Rating: 1 )
by mysticpoet on Wednesday, 17th November 2004 @ 05:38:59 PM AEST
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Pixie, this poem is very good. Dreams can feel so real sometimes. The sad ones, I'm always glad morning has come.

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