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Array ( [sid] => 54306 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => We All Fall Down [time] => 2004-06-30 21:25:04 [hometext] => I looked too closely at the moon and saw....... [bodytext] => ___________________

vested in darkest night
moonlight rises to my left
across my fingertips regret
drips like sorrow
bittersweet
without apology
step closer
suggesting we could be
more and more
dare we live the dream
grab the brass ring
or sit quietly by
heads bowed in prayer
when god has forsaken us
to chase better things
with brighter futures
across the millenniums
we are bereft of love
yet passion churns
relentless in our breasts
asking too much of us
but never enough
to ease the ache
desire leaves holes
our bleak hearts
bleeding constantly
a trail of love spent
in youth and ignorance
emptied now we wait
with papery dreams of greatness
to keep us company at night
[comments] => 2 [counter] => 211 [topic] => 21 [informant] => merry [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 15 [ratings] => 3 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => Lifepoems )

We All Fall Down

Contributed by merry on Wednesday, 30th June 2004 @ 09:25:04 PM in AEST
Topic: Lifepoems

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vested in darkest night
moonlight rises to my left
across my fingertips regret
drips like sorrow
bittersweet
without apology
step closer
suggesting we could be
more and more
dare we live the dream
grab the brass ring
or sit quietly by
heads bowed in prayer
when god has forsaken us
to chase better things
with brighter futures
across the millenniums
we are bereft of love
yet passion churns
relentless in our breasts
asking too much of us
but never enough
to ease the ache
desire leaves holes
our bleak hearts
bleeding constantly
a trail of love spent
in youth and ignorance
emptied now we wait
with papery dreams of greatness
to keep us company at night

Copyright © merry ... [ 2004-06-30 21:25:04]
(Date/Time posted on site)

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Re: We All Fall Down (User Rating: 1 )
by brokenwings on Wednesday, 30th June 2004 @ 09:44:48 PM AEST
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all i can say is very interesting... very good but very interesting

Re: We All Fall Down (User Rating: 1 )
by ladyfawn on Wednesday, 30th June 2004 @ 11:42:23 PM AEST
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breathtakingly beautiful, gaille, i so whole heartedly agree, i love your expression of feelings; your words are so well placed, your pen is golden sis, huggies n' love nessa

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