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Watching as they wind on without me
So easily it seems
Countless times I’ll never know
When you’ll return to me

Chorus: Locked away
Until you come home
I long for you every day
Hoplessly awaiting
I cant breathe
When you’ve gone away
Return to me
So I can be free

I cant escape the sent you left
Stains on all the memories I hold
I don’t dare leave my heart again
I fear it might just leave me here cold

CHORUS

Remain here with me
Protecting it all from the creeping loniliness
Pretend you’ll never leave once more
hold me drenched in your thoughtfulness
So every morning I’ll never stray
from believing you’ll come home one day

CHORUS
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Locked Away

Contributed by Soulless on Wednesday, 30th June 2004 @ 08:29:10 PM in AEST
Topic: DarkPoetry

Ive been left inside this house for days
Watching as they wind on without me
So easily it seems
Countless times I’ll never know
When you’ll return to me

Chorus: Locked away
Until you come home
I long for you every day
Hoplessly awaiting
I cant breathe
When you’ve gone away
Return to me
So I can be free

I cant escape the sent you left
Stains on all the memories I hold
I don’t dare leave my heart again
I fear it might just leave me here cold

CHORUS

Remain here with me
Protecting it all from the creeping loniliness
Pretend you’ll never leave once more
hold me drenched in your thoughtfulness
So every morning I’ll never stray
from believing you’ll come home one day

CHORUS

Copyright Â© Soulless ... [ 2004-06-30 20:29:10]
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Re: Locked Away (User Rating: 1 )
by xxbreathlessx on Wednesday, 30th June 2004 @ 08:33:44 PM AEST
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wow great song, i really liked it, great job!

Re: Locked Away (User Rating: 1 )
by blueheart on Wednesday, 30th June 2004 @ 08:43:52 PM AEST
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You are a talented musician. These are great lyrics.
Its such a coincidence that the first poem I ever wrote was titled Locked Away.
Great write.

Re: Locked Away (User Rating: 1 )
by bobotheclown on Wednesday, 30th June 2004 @ 09:57:25 PM AEST
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this was amazing the last two verses really hit me hard, "Stains on all the memories I hold" I loved that line the best keep it up.

Bobo (Joel)

Re: Locked Away (User Rating: 1 )
by ladyfawn on Thursday, 1st July 2004 @ 12:26:21 AM AEST
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awww............

Re: Locked Away (User Rating: 1 )
by Mortis-Dark on Thursday, 1st July 2004 @ 01:25:12 AM AEST
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Soulless let me be the first to say that I have been very entriqued by your writing. Always have been a fan. EXCELLENT WRITE. Theres no letter short for that. I could see thins song as hit with a alternitive beat, maybe something by apc or stone sour.

Re: Locked Away (User Rating: 1 )
by pixie on Thursday, 1st July 2004 @ 06:34:59 AM AEST
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wow, great poem...

pixie xx

Re: Locked Away (User Rating: 1 )
by Kindredblood_dragon on Thursday, 1st July 2004 @ 07:45:05 PM AEST
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Bobotheclown recomended your writes to me, so here I be.
And he was write you have talent to mesmirize, this poem/song was sad yet you created an image which left me feeling trapped and lost,
With this talent of yours you will go far and I wish you all the best in future endevoures, I hope all that you strive for are granted.
good luck and take care.

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