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Array ( [sid] => 54290 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => Mother (Disturbing) [time] => 2004-06-30 18:01:46 [hometext] => Wow I like this one alot. [bodytext] => Mother im sorry.
These words will not heal these wounds im about to create.
I did something obscene today.
Telling you the one I love has hurt me most in this way.

I never meant to hurt her.
It just happed so fast.
We were out riding and something just didnt pass.
She told me how she cheated and stole.
My heart tore to pieces.
She was my unfitting picture.
That with my heart would make complete.

We pulled over about a mile down the old dirt road.
The one with the saw mill and the creek from old.
There she started crying and telling me she was carrying.
I asked her who the daddy was and she said that wasnt happening.

This is the moment I died.
Then and their.
My tears fell from my face as her head collided into the windshield.
Again and again til my white mazda shown red.
In my head I just knew that she was dead.
I wipped my bloody hands on her skirt.
Then her body dumped in the creek.
Where I tied her feet with a block and set her off.

Now I wonder what can I do.
These blood staind hands wont come clean easily.
I just need an alliby.
Just one white lie.
Her parents will be *****.
Because she missed the rest of her life.
But she ruined mine.

So what am I to do.
O what am I to do.
The sheriff will be called and the federal men brought in.
Theres no hiding or denying that I killed her.
For when I was done I carved this under her tattoo sun.

"You were selfish and a fool".
"For you lying ***** only death will do". [comments] => 3 [counter] => 247 [topic] => 13 [informant] => Mortis-Dark [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 0 [ratings] => 0 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => DarkPoetry )
Mother (Disturbing)

Contributed by Mortis-Dark on Wednesday, 30th June 2004 @ 06:01:46 PM in AEST
Topic: DarkPoetry



Mother im sorry.
These words will not heal these wounds im about to create.
I did something obscene today.
Telling you the one I love has hurt me most in this way.

I never meant to hurt her.
It just happed so fast.
We were out riding and something just didnt pass.
She told me how she cheated and stole.
My heart tore to pieces.
She was my unfitting picture.
That with my heart would make complete.

We pulled over about a mile down the old dirt road.
The one with the saw mill and the creek from old.
There she started crying and telling me she was carrying.
I asked her who the daddy was and she said that wasnt happening.

This is the moment I died.
Then and their.
My tears fell from my face as her head collided into the windshield.
Again and again til my white mazda shown red.
In my head I just knew that she was dead.
I wipped my bloody hands on her skirt.
Then her body dumped in the creek.
Where I tied her feet with a block and set her off.

Now I wonder what can I do.
These blood staind hands wont come clean easily.
I just need an alliby.
Just one white lie.
Her parents will be *****.
Because she missed the rest of her life.
But she ruined mine.

So what am I to do.
O what am I to do.
The sheriff will be called and the federal men brought in.
Theres no hiding or denying that I killed her.
For when I was done I carved this under her tattoo sun.

"You were selfish and a fool".
"For you lying ***** only death will do".




Copyright © Mortis-Dark ... [ 2004-06-30 18:01:46]
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Re: Mother (Disturbing) (User Rating: 1 )
by tifrob on Wednesday, 30th June 2004 @ 08:31:34 PM AEST
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Wow, you make the reader feel as if this truly happened. I hope this poem was from a vivid imagination.

J~


Re: Mother (Disturbing) (User Rating: 1 )
by Essentially9 on Wednesday, 30th June 2004 @ 08:34:21 PM AEST
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wow. i think that says it all. lol. its interesting though death does for all of us.


Re: Mother (Disturbing) (User Rating: 1 )
by x_midnight_x on Thursday, 1st July 2004 @ 11:57:47 AM AEST
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it reminds me alot of eminems lyrics in the song stan i guess lol




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