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[sid] => 5426
[catid] => 1
[aid] => Mick
[title] => Break It To You Gently
[time] => 2002-10-22 15:00:00
[hometext] => This poem (or song) desperately needs some work. I am not crazy about the ending, but the topic I think is good enough to try to fix it - Any suggestions?
[bodytext] => It’s been so long, I don’t know where to start Over the years, you surely left your mark on me- And it’s breaking my heart that I have to let you down so easily When I’d rather show you every scar and leave you standing there, Screaming out my name in agony, I want to hurt you the way that you hurt me- But I’m gonna break it to you gently….. You held a broken woman, long enough in your hands To give her will to fly, you gave me the strength to stand And you dropped me way too far down, when finally I rose above the ground. I will thank you for my pain, it makes me stronger everyday, That is how I can look at you, in spite of all that you can’t see, I’m gonna break it to you gently. As for my heart, I can feel it’s on the mend Since I can choose not to let you in But still there is so far to go, out here alone With all you put me through Seems reality pains us both, I was your host Into a helluva different game, But in the end it’s all the same – nothings changed You never could see, So I’m gonna break it to you gently….. [comments] => 2 [counter] => 172 [topic] => 22 [informant] => juliette [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 4 [ratings] => 1 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => LostLove )
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