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Mother Element
Contributed by
MLCstar
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Tuesday, 29th June 2004 @ 09:18:34 PM in AEST
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Ripped from Earth, yet made of Water
Fire burns and Wind does falter
Loving mother's heart is broken
From our slanders never spoken
Copyright ©
MLCstar
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2004-06-29 21:18:34] (Date/Time posted on
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Re: Mother Element
(User Rating: 1 ) by TheNextRobertFrost on
Tuesday, 29th June 2004 @ 09:23:53 PM AEST (User
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Beautiful and imaginative. Good work!
T. A. B
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Re: Mother Element
(User Rating: 1 ) by Essentially9 on
Tuesday, 29th June 2004 @ 10:46:22 PM AEST (User
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amazing write. |
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Re: Mother Element
(User Rating: 1 ) by angelav on
Wednesday, 30th June 2004 @ 12:29:59 AM AEST (User
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Perfect. |
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Re: Mother Element
(User Rating: 1 ) by venkat on
Tuesday, 13th July 2004 @ 05:25:18 AM AEST (User
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Interesting and very beautiful. venkat |
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