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[aid] => mick
[title] => forgive you? well I'll see
[time] => 2004-06-29 20:47:59
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[bodytext] => ON ME YOU"VE PUT QUITE A STRAIN,YES YOU TOOK MY NAME IN VAIN.ALL OF MY COMMANDMENTS YOU TRIED TO BREAK,I'VE TAKEN ABOUT ALL FROM YOU I CAN TAKE.IT'S GETTING HARD FOR YOU TO HEAR,NOW YOU FEEL YOU NEED ME NEAR.YOUR EYES ARE GROWING EVER SO WEAK,OF THAT IT SEEMS SO HARD TO SPEAK.MY SON YOU'VE CHALLENGED MY EVERY TEST,NOW IT'S TIME FOR YOU TO REST. " I" CREATED THE HEAVEN AND THE EARTH, YOU TOOK IT FOR ALL IT'S WORTH.YOU'VE TAKEN EVERY STEP IN STRIDE, TIME FOR YOU TO GIVE UP YOUR MAN MADE PRIDE. "I" AM THE MASTER,"I" HAVE ALL SAY, IT'S UP TO ME IF YOU GO OR STAY. THOSE CIGARETTES PUT A RATTLE IN YOUR VOICE,NOW ABOUT THE CANCER YOU HAVE NO CHOICE. "I" SPOKE OF WINE , YOU CHOSE HARD BOOZE. AND MARKED YOUR ARMS WITH OLD TATTOOS."I" SAID LOVE THY NEIGHBOR NOT JUST HIS WIFE , NOW LOOK AT YOU HERE DOING LIFE. NOW YOU LISTEN CLOSE WHILE "I" HAVE MY SAY "I" CAN CHANGE "MY" MIND BEFORE JUDGEMENT DAY.
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forgive you? well I'll see
Contributed by
thomasmartinroberts
on
Tuesday, 29th June 2004 @ 08:47:59 PM in AEST
Topic:
toughstuff
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ON ME YOU"VE PUT QUITE A STRAIN,YES YOU TOOK MY NAME IN VAIN.ALL OF MY COMMANDMENTS YOU TRIED TO BREAK,I'VE TAKEN ABOUT ALL FROM YOU I CAN TAKE.IT'S GETTING HARD FOR YOU TO HEAR,NOW YOU FEEL YOU NEED ME NEAR.YOUR EYES ARE GROWING EVER SO WEAK,OF THAT IT SEEMS SO HARD TO SPEAK.MY SON YOU'VE CHALLENGED MY EVERY TEST,NOW IT'S TIME FOR YOU TO REST. " I" CREATED THE HEAVEN AND THE EARTH, YOU TOOK IT FOR ALL IT'S WORTH.YOU'VE TAKEN EVERY STEP IN STRIDE, TIME FOR YOU TO GIVE UP YOUR MAN MADE PRIDE. "I" AM THE MASTER,"I" HAVE ALL SAY, IT'S UP TO ME IF YOU GO OR STAY. THOSE CIGARETTES PUT A RATTLE IN YOUR VOICE,NOW ABOUT THE CANCER YOU HAVE NO CHOICE. "I" SPOKE OF WINE , YOU CHOSE HARD BOOZE. AND MARKED YOUR ARMS WITH OLD TATTOOS."I" SAID LOVE THY NEIGHBOR NOT JUST HIS WIFE , NOW LOOK AT YOU HERE DOING LIFE. NOW YOU LISTEN CLOSE WHILE "I" HAVE MY SAY "I" CAN CHANGE "MY" MIND BEFORE JUDGEMENT DAY.
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Re: forgive you? well I'll see
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by TheNextRobertFrost on
Tuesday, 29th June 2004 @ 08:56:34 PM AEST
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Great poem, keep it up
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Re: forgive you? well I'll see
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by Jenni_K on
Tuesday, 29th June 2004 @ 10:09:02 PM AEST
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This is good.... really touching....
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