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Array ( [sid] => 54125 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => Death is coming [time] => 2004-06-29 11:53:27 [hometext] => [bodytext] => I now know
I am not meant to be
in a world not so free
my mind is not in a good place
coming and going
like pictures of a last warrior
I may not be fighting on the walls
or may never hold a gun
but I still fight a war
the one inside my head
it calls out and cries
I am isolating
so the world wont see my tears
i have been pushed one too many times
hear wat my mind is going through
stop those distant sounds
of rape and violence they are growing
and I am losing my control
crying for the grave
taking my own is hard
when someone always saves your life
I just cannot keep walking with my hand on this trigger
I want to pull it and then
BANG! [comments] => 4 [counter] => 144 [topic] => 48 [informant] => Hearts [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 0 [ratings] => 0 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => EmotionalPoetry )

Death is coming

Contributed by Hearts on Tuesday, 29th June 2004 @ 11:53:27 AM in AEST
Topic: EmotionalPoetry

I now know
I am not meant to be
in a world not so free
my mind is not in a good place
coming and going
like pictures of a last warrior
I may not be fighting on the walls
or may never hold a gun
but I still fight a war
the one inside my head
it calls out and cries
I am isolating
so the world wont see my tears
i have been pushed one too many times
hear wat my mind is going through
stop those distant sounds
of rape and violence they are growing
and I am losing my control
crying for the grave
taking my own is hard
when someone always saves your life
I just cannot keep walking with my hand on this trigger
I want to pull it and then
BANG!

Copyright © Hearts ... [ 2004-06-29 11:53:27]
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Re: Death is coming (User Rating: 1 )
by Lost_Shadow on Tuesday, 29th June 2004 @ 12:06:15 PM AEST
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A very deep and emotional poem. I enjoyed it

Re: Death is coming (User Rating: 1 )
by pixie on Tuesday, 29th June 2004 @ 12:31:31 PM AEST
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yes.. very deep, a great write

pixie xx

Re: Death is coming (User Rating: 1 )
by Essentially9 on Wednesday, 4th August 2004 @ 11:10:18 PM AEST
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very emotional indeed.

Re: Death is coming (User Rating: 1 )
by flamingblade on Tuesday, 16th May 2006 @ 02:51:52 PM AEST
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Holy
hi thats very choke up-ing
nice

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