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Array ( [sid] => 5411 [catid] => 1 [aid] => Mick [title] => This Place [time] => 2002-10-22 11:15:00 [hometext] => Jus a poem about how i daydream about my former life when life was good and treated me well, and how now it's all ***** up and i don't kno how to get it back. [bodytext] => My mind is drifting,
drifting far away,
to a place I once knew,
a place filled with love and grace.

This place was all I ever wanted,
all I would ever need,
it was free from all that is now,
all that is to be.

The place I'm at,
is not the place I want,
it's far from that,
far from love and grace.

Life now it hell,
I'm living in disgust,
it's all a bunch of lies,
all a bunch of nothing.

I ask myself,
over and over again,
Why I let this happen,
Why He let this happen.

Things will get better,
maybe, if I want it bad enough,
but as for now I'm stuck,
stuck here in the middle.

[comments] => 1 [counter] => 158 [topic] => 21 [informant] => themestuppreppypunk [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 0 [ratings] => 0 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => Lifepoems )

This Place

Contributed by themestuppreppypunk on Tuesday, 22nd October 2002 @ 11:15:00 AM in AEST
Topic: Lifepoems

My mind is drifting,
drifting far away,
to a place I once knew,
a place filled with love and grace.

This place was all I ever wanted,
all I would ever need,
it was free from all that is now,
all that is to be.

The place I'm at,
is not the place I want,
it's far from that,
far from love and grace.

Life now it hell,
I'm living in disgust,
it's all a bunch of lies,
all a bunch of nothing.

I ask myself,
over and over again,
Why I let this happen,
Why He let this happen.

Things will get better,
maybe, if I want it bad enough,
but as for now I'm stuck,
stuck here in the middle.

Copyright © themestuppreppypunk ... [ 2002-10-22 11:15:00]
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Re: This Place (User Rating: 1 )
by Essentially9 on Sunday, 1st August 2004 @ 10:23:49 PM AEST
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as you know you cant go back. it starts from the past but you are in the present so your future outcome is affected by what you do now, which you already know i assume. you are a step above so many others, you can make it, but it all rides on you whether you let go or make it.

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