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Array ( [sid] => 541 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => Dizzy [time] => 2002-07-16 09:59:43 [hometext] => This one's a bit tricky. It has a nice duality to it though. If you read it slowly and consider the words one at a time, then it tells a story. If you read it fast, then the words become meaningless, and it turns into a nice little game. Try and see if you can say the whole thing quickly without messing up. [bodytext] =>

im dumb
dizzy dumb
daily doing doubting done
diving daring down and drum
the drowning droning dizzy dumb
draining dying dreaming drum
daily dying running from
the doubting droning dizzy dumb
leaving lying walking from
the dreaming drowning dizzy dumb
learning loving living lung
lapping latent lactic numb
leering lying learning from
the dreaming drowning dizzy dumb
meaning loaning learning moaning
dreary droning dizzy dumb
meeting mating marking numb
making dreaming learning done
growing going meeting numb
learning leaving dizzy dumb
gaining loaning moaning groaning
grazing grating growing gun
gravy going moaning loaning
dreary drowsy draining dumb
grinning loving leaving going
marking making dizzy moaning
grinding lying laying groaning
dreary drowning dizzy dumb
leaving leaving leaving going
going drowning dizzy dumb
growing growing growing going
going drowning dizzy gun
gazing moaning latent waiting
glaring drowning dizzy dumb
going going going going
going going dizzy done [comments] => 1 [counter] => 164 [topic] => 21 [informant] => Butterat_Zool [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 5 [ratings] => 1 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => Lifepoems )
Dizzy

Contributed by Butterat_Zool on Tuesday, 16th July 2002 @ 09:59:43 AM in AEST
Topic: Lifepoems





im dumb
dizzy dumb
daily doing doubting done
diving daring down and drum
the drowning droning dizzy dumb
draining dying dreaming drum
daily dying running from
the doubting droning dizzy dumb
leaving lying walking from
the dreaming drowning dizzy dumb
learning loving living lung
lapping latent lactic numb
leering lying learning from
the dreaming drowning dizzy dumb
meaning loaning learning moaning
dreary droning dizzy dumb
meeting mating marking numb
making dreaming learning done
growing going meeting numb
learning leaving dizzy dumb
gaining loaning moaning groaning
grazing grating growing gun
gravy going moaning loaning
dreary drowsy draining dumb
grinning loving leaving going
marking making dizzy moaning
grinding lying laying groaning
dreary drowning dizzy dumb
leaving leaving leaving going
going drowning dizzy dumb
growing growing growing going
going drowning dizzy gun
gazing moaning latent waiting
glaring drowning dizzy dumb
going going going going
going going dizzy done




Copyright © Butterat_Zool ... [ 2002-07-16 09:59:43]
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Re: Dizzy (User Rating: 1 )
by Jackee_line on Tuesday, 12th November 2002 @ 06:35:52 AM AEST
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wow...well written

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