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[sid] => 54085
[catid] => 1
[aid] => mick
[title] => end her life
[time] => 2004-06-29 00:04:09
[hometext] => this girl sara broke my sisters (rainbowtearz) heart and even told her that if she killed herself she wouldnt be at the funeral. yet my sister loves her. this is my poem bout my love for sara
[bodytext] => typing at the computer sharing my life with others hearing sobs and cries escape from under the covers i glance back and see tears flowing out of your eyes her painful words are bringing you to your demise hatred for her grows like a vine and strangles my heart it kills me inside to see you like this falling apart i try and comfort but my words fail at easing your pain my deadly rage towards her i can no longer restrain vivid plans of her departure consume all my thoughts almost hear her high pitched scream after my shots inside my head i see her drowning in her own blood crimson red swallows up her house in its deathly flood thoughts dont torture so i head over to her house i find her layin on the ground with her undone blouse the reason she ended your relationship was a lie she never sees me as she lets out a pleasurefull sigh all four eyes are closed as i swiftly sneak up behind knives in my hands and her painful death on my mind pulling her partner off i toss her onto the ground she lays there astonished barely making a sound i have nothing against her she simply got in my way knife piercing her skull is the price she will now pay turning back to my sisters ex i see shes disappeared i follow the trail of her blood thats been smeared hiding in the corner hands covering her hideous face she prays to the lord and asks him for his good grace nothing can stop me now as i have her how i want her she hurt so many in her life now she meets her killer with my rope i tie her hands as she kicks and screams blood and sweat run off her beaten face in streams i retrieve my knife as she lies on the ground in a pile forcing the blade into her body i begin to smile blood sprays up into my eyes and blurs my vision i wipe my face and down falls the bright red crimson her screams flow out creating a melodic rhytmic tune beauty of her pain reminds me of a rose in full bloom my knife happily carves away at her body full of fat she pleads with me to stop as onto her face i spat i hold my knife above my head and watch her lay there her body barely alive and her face marked with terror into her chest i deeply thrust my steel chrome knife she murdered my sisters heart now i shall end her life [comments] => 9 [counter] => 216 [topic] => 13 [informant] => deadbloodyrose [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 10 [ratings] => 2 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => DarkPoetry )
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