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And a pledge is a curse when it’s built on deceit.
While the sun is a cloud in an ominous sky.

When all of your dreaming is now lost and awry.
You’re feeling the burden as you’re smothered complete.
When forever is never and built on a lie.

The rain is now falling though you struggle to try.
To take back your reason from a darkening street.
While the sun is a cloud in an ominous sky.

There’s giving and taking. Only one makes you cry.
The answers you’re given leave the mark of defeat.
When forever is never and built on a lie.

The darkness consumes you. To yourself you must lie.
And try to convince you that you’ve never been beat.
While the sun is a cloud in an ominous sky.

The ending is two fold, it’s your choice what to try.
The truth is the first step to rekindle your heat.
When forever is never and built on a lie.
While the sun is a cloud in an ominous sky.

Michael David Morash
Copyright © 2004
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When Forever Is Never (And Built On A Lie)

Contributed by mdmorash on Monday, 28th June 2004 @ 11:28:15 PM in AEST
Topic: Grief

When forever is never and built on a lie.
And a pledge is a curse when it’s built on deceit.
While the sun is a cloud in an ominous sky.

When all of your dreaming is now lost and awry.
You’re feeling the burden as you’re smothered complete.
When forever is never and built on a lie.

The rain is now falling though you struggle to try.
To take back your reason from a darkening street.
While the sun is a cloud in an ominous sky.

There’s giving and taking. Only one makes you cry.
The answers you’re given leave the mark of defeat.
When forever is never and built on a lie.

The darkness consumes you. To yourself you must lie.
And try to convince you that you’ve never been beat.
While the sun is a cloud in an ominous sky.

The ending is two fold, it’s your choice what to try.
The truth is the first step to rekindle your heat.
When forever is never and built on a lie.
While the sun is a cloud in an ominous sky.

Michael David Morash
Copyright © 2004

Copyright Â© mdmorash ... [ 2004-06-28 23:28:15]
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Re: When Forever Is Never (And Built On A Lie) (User Rating: 1 )
by PumpkinPie on Tuesday, 29th June 2004 @ 12:40:43 AM AEST
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Strong write,original and very interesting.You portray each stanza based on same verses,yet each one contains a different meaning all in accordance with eachother.Kudos to you Michael on a beautiful write,
PumpkinPie

Re: When Forever Is Never (And Built On A Lie) (User Rating: 1 )
by pixie on Tuesday, 29th June 2004 @ 12:07:14 PM AEST
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this is amazingly written

pixie xx

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