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A sea of smiling faces
I’m part of that sea
Crashing beneath the waves
Screaming to be heard
But a thousand hungry voices
Swallow my own
So none can hear
And none will listen
Why won’t you hear me?
I’m part of that sea
That sea of smiling faces
I’m crashing beneath the waves
My smirk struggles to be seen
But a thousand glowing smiles
Out-smirk my own
So none will see
None want to see
Why won’t you see me?
You look at me
But you don’t see me
You listen to me
But you don’t hear me
I’m screaming
Screaming to be heard
But you ignore my cries
My angry pleas
See me.
Hear me.
See my lips form these words.
Hear these words formed by my lips.
I’m fine.
Back
The *****
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See Me, Hear Me

Contributed by blackmarker on Monday, 28th June 2004 @ 08:01:47 PM in AEST
Topic: AngryPoetry

Drowning in a sea of voices
A sea of smiling faces
I’m part of that sea
Crashing beneath the waves
Screaming to be heard
But a thousand hungry voices
Swallow my own
So none can hear
And none will listen
Why won’t you hear me?
I’m part of that sea
That sea of smiling faces
I’m crashing beneath the waves
My smirk struggles to be seen
But a thousand glowing smiles
Out-smirk my own
So none will see
None want to see
Why won’t you see me?
You look at me
But you don’t see me
You listen to me
But you don’t hear me
I’m screaming
Screaming to be heard
But you ignore my cries
My angry pleas
See me.
Hear me.
See my lips form these words.
Hear these words formed by my lips.
I’m fine.
Back
The *****
Off.

Copyright Â© blackmarker ... [ 2004-06-28 20:01:47]
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Re: See Me, Hear Me (User Rating: 1 )
by xxbreathlessx on Monday, 28th June 2004 @ 09:10:23 PM AEST
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wow i liked it, strong poetry, but very good poetry

Re: See Me, Hear Me (User Rating: 1 )
by Essentially9 on Monday, 28th June 2004 @ 09:49:20 PM AEST
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intriguing and very powerful. fantastico.

Re: See Me, Hear Me (User Rating: 1 )
by sicknivesevered on Tuesday, 29th June 2004 @ 02:22:14 PM AEST
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I love it. The repitition was worked in flawlessy, but the ending is what makes it so great. It was like a punch in the gut. Great work.

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