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Array ( [sid] => 54054 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => Demon Daddy [time] => 2004-06-28 19:53:27 [hometext] => Some people can be so wonderful until you truly know them. I often wonder if some are even human at all. Just remember that evil is not always apparent. [bodytext] => I used to call you “Daddy,” but we were not enough.
Your heart had no place for love of others.
Everything you ever did was for you.
Yet you lead us along in your convincing lies.
All the while killing us inside.
Are you even human underneath your skin,
Or just an evil demon in human flesh?
Was it not bad enough that you tried to break my Mother’s spirit?
Why did you slander her name too?
You painted her to be the evil one.
All she ever tried to do was love you,
That was all I tried to do as well.
But to you our devotion meant nothing
And you still do not claim responsibility.
Do you get wicked satisfaction from our pain?
I surely think you do.
One day you will get what you deserve and be destroyed.
Your precious reputation torn to shreds.
If I could be a part of your downfall.
Would that be my greatest joy? [comments] => 4 [counter] => 238 [topic] => 6 [informant] => MLCstar [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 8 [ratings] => 2 [editpoem] => 0 [associated] => [topicname] => AngryPoetry )

Demon Daddy

Contributed by MLCstar on Monday, 28th June 2004 @ 07:53:27 PM in AEST
Topic: AngryPoetry

I used to call you “Daddy,” but we were not enough.
Your heart had no place for love of others.
Everything you ever did was for you.
Yet you lead us along in your convincing lies.
All the while killing us inside.
Are you even human underneath your skin,
Or just an evil demon in human flesh?
Was it not bad enough that you tried to break my Mother’s spirit?
Why did you slander her name too?
You painted her to be the evil one.
All she ever tried to do was love you,
That was all I tried to do as well.
But to you our devotion meant nothing
And you still do not claim responsibility.
Do you get wicked satisfaction from our pain?
I surely think you do.
One day you will get what you deserve and be destroyed.
Your precious reputation torn to shreds.
If I could be a part of your downfall.
Would that be my greatest joy?

Copyright Â© MLCstar ... [ 2004-06-28 19:53:27]
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Re: Demon Daddy (User Rating: 1 )
by Essentially9 on Monday, 28th June 2004 @ 09:58:55 PM AEST
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very emotional, i felt the anger. someone i know has a father similar to yours, and it hurts her family deeply. but i myself cannot relate to this because i do not have a father. your father might have a good side somewhere in his existence, but if he does; its not evident. perception is everything and the wrong perception can cost you everything.

Re: Demon Daddy (User Rating: 1 )
by WestCPunk on Thursday, 8th July 2004 @ 12:01:47 AM AEST
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The things you write like this only bring me to tears.........everything you talk about i go through along with so much more.............anyways nice job.......Shelbi

Re: Demon Daddy (User Rating: 1 )
by LouiseEvans on Thursday, 22nd July 2004 @ 11:24:08 AM AEST
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this is a god poem that expresses a lolt of sorrow. I know the sorrow you face, because I was married to a man who did the same thing to me that your father did to your mother. My Children hurt----

Re: Demon Daddy (User Rating: 1 )
by deathdrop on Tuesday, 24th August 2004 @ 02:48:25 AM AEST
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your poetry lets me in to feel your same anger, hate, and frustration... i can't relate to this, but i am so sorry that you ad to go through this... i really am.
it's good that you had a way of letting out your feelings though.

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