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Array ( [sid] => 54046 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => Live Your Life [time] => 2004-06-28 19:18:27 [hometext] => Just live... [bodytext] => Slam communication in the wall
Kick your entertainment in the face
Burn up your words
And break all your verbs
Live imbeetween your firewood
Just throw it all
Down the drain
Thats right
Live your life long
Because it is so very long
But die knowing it's meaning
That's right
Run the government into the ground
But shove their control in the sun
Lem them evaporate
Unplug their heads
To hear the cries
That's right
Throw your phone
Kick your television
And computer screens
Burn the books
Break the music
Hide in a forest
Be a hermit
Live life
That's right
Be not controlled
Feel like swimming through your vains
And in your soul
Exuberate it
Let it grow
Just know
Before you go
What its like to live.

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Live Your Life

Contributed by Asatru on Monday, 28th June 2004 @ 07:18:27 PM in AEST
Topic: Lifepoems

Slam communication in the wall
Kick your entertainment in the face
Burn up your words
And break all your verbs
Live imbeetween your firewood
Just throw it all
Down the drain
Thats right
Live your life long
Because it is so very long
But die knowing it's meaning
That's right
Run the government into the ground
But shove their control in the sun
Lem them evaporate
Unplug their heads
To hear the cries
That's right
Throw your phone
Kick your television
And computer screens
Burn the books
Break the music
Hide in a forest
Be a hermit
Live life
That's right
Be not controlled
Feel like swimming through your vains
And in your soul
Exuberate it
Let it grow
Just know
Before you go
What its like to live.

Copyright © Asatru ... [ 2004-06-28 19:18:27]
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Re: Live Your Life (User Rating: 1 )
by Essentially9 on Monday, 28th June 2004 @ 10:06:58 PM AEST
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very interesting piece. some of your philosophy i agree with, but i think there is more than that controlling us. i think that time, emotion, and beliefs can be the most controlling. look at your life right now, isnt almost everything connected somehow to time. emotion can control things you do, and thus control how you live. without emotion we would then be left with thoughts and beliefs. your beliefs arent always right and they also control what you do and how you live. living as a hermit would still leave a person to be controlled by time, emotion, and belief.

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