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Array ( [sid] => 54045 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => Tribute to the Silent Death [time] => 2004-06-28 19:14:40 [hometext] => I actually wrote this two years ago, but I forgot most of it, so I had to rebuild it, and I know I left one or two lines out, which is sad. Please don't hate me. Tell me what you think, thanks. [bodytext] => The resounding ring of a metal thing
Whistling through the air
Strikes the guard from the dark
Ending the silent scream
To and fro the dark figures go
Knives flashing in the night
Everquiet the sound of coming death
Lives end without a fight

The tickle of steel on the neck of one
Unsuspecting guard
The darkness pierced by a crimson line
Forming a fluid arch
The figure creeps up the wall, it seems
Vanishing in mid-air
The assassin's blade never sleeps
It keeps dancing in the air [comments] => 4 [counter] => 191 [topic] => 40 [informant] => TheLastStringCut [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 5 [ratings] => 1 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => fantasy )
Tribute to the Silent Death

Contributed by TheLastStringCut on Monday, 28th June 2004 @ 07:14:40 PM in AEST
Topic: fantasy



The resounding ring of a metal thing
Whistling through the air
Strikes the guard from the dark
Ending the silent scream
To and fro the dark figures go
Knives flashing in the night
Everquiet the sound of coming death
Lives end without a fight

The tickle of steel on the neck of one
Unsuspecting guard
The darkness pierced by a crimson line
Forming a fluid arch
The figure creeps up the wall, it seems
Vanishing in mid-air
The assassin's blade never sleeps
It keeps dancing in the air




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Re: Tribute to the Silent Death (User Rating: 1 )
by deadbloodyrose on Tuesday, 29th June 2004 @ 01:12:32 PM AEST
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aww i liked this poem jeff.. u used really good descriptive words... rawr.. i love you.. AMI JO


Re: Tribute to the Silent Death (User Rating: 1 )
by FleurdeSang on Tuesday, 3rd August 2004 @ 01:12:10 PM AEST
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AWESOME WRITE! LOVED IT! dunno why people don't read it!! it's really good! (applauds) well written! love the imagery you created! all in all, beautifully disturbing poem! all my respect to the poet...

*FleurdeSang


Re: Tribute to the Silent Death (User Rating: 1 )
by TheLastStringCut on Monday, 11th October 2004 @ 02:24:41 PM AEST
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Night liquid black pain of death thanatos
Reap the soul of innocence how much the devil tolls
lift the chorus creseindo a requiem of blood
the dead they hunger merciless for your very flesh and bone
cut asunder the temporal void between the thrice planes
and leave a scar of memories encript into rotting brains....
- Devin Ragnarok.


Re: Tribute to the Silent Death (User Rating: 1 )
by TheLastStringCut on Monday, 11th October 2004 @ 02:26:09 PM AEST
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Night liquid black pain of death thanatos
Reap the soul of innocence how much the devil tolls
lift the chorus creseindo a requiem of blood
the dead they hunger merciless for your very flesh and bone
cut asunder the temporal void between the thrice planes
and leave a scar of memories encript into rotting brains....
- Devin Ragnarok.




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