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Array ( [sid] => 54037 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => Beautiful Sadness [time] => 2004-06-28 18:15:11 [hometext] => havn`t you ever seen someone eyes filled with beautiful sadness? [bodytext] => blood drips from her arm
pain endures her body quick
and just as quick it leaves
its been a long time since she done
her skin any wrong

she lifts up her eyes
eyes so chocolate brown
they scream at you,
Beautiful Sadness...

she gave her heart to him
in hopes it would not tear
she gave him all of her
but hollow words fill her ear
its over.

she lifts up her eyes
eyes so chocolate brown
they scream at you,
Beautiful Sadness...

she heard the song
that perfects every note so vividly
the song of shallow whispers
she stood still and listened timidly


she lifts up her eyes
eyes so chocolate brown
they scream at you,
Beautiful Sadness...

she stands alone in front of her mirrior
and studies her refelction
tears swell her eyes
knowing she`d never meet perfection


she lifts up her eyes
eyes so chocolate brown
they scream at you,
Beautiful Sadness...

its getting dark
but no-one can hear
her heart screming out
or see her invisible tears
no-one hers her song
no-one gets her game
no-one knows wuts goin on
inside her brain

blood drips from her arm
pain endures her body quick
and just as quick it leaves
its been a long time since she done
her skin any wrong

she lifts up her eyes
eyes so chocolate brown
they scream at you,
Beautiful Sadness...


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Beautiful Sadness

Contributed by xxbreathlessx on Monday, 28th June 2004 @ 06:15:11 PM in AEST
Topic: SadPoetry



blood drips from her arm
pain endures her body quick
and just as quick it leaves
its been a long time since she done
her skin any wrong

she lifts up her eyes
eyes so chocolate brown
they scream at you,
Beautiful Sadness...

she gave her heart to him
in hopes it would not tear
she gave him all of her
but hollow words fill her ear
its over.

she lifts up her eyes
eyes so chocolate brown
they scream at you,
Beautiful Sadness...

she heard the song
that perfects every note so vividly
the song of shallow whispers
she stood still and listened timidly


she lifts up her eyes
eyes so chocolate brown
they scream at you,
Beautiful Sadness...

she stands alone in front of her mirrior
and studies her refelction
tears swell her eyes
knowing she`d never meet perfection


she lifts up her eyes
eyes so chocolate brown
they scream at you,
Beautiful Sadness...

its getting dark
but no-one can hear
her heart screming out
or see her invisible tears
no-one hers her song
no-one gets her game
no-one knows wuts goin on
inside her brain

blood drips from her arm
pain endures her body quick
and just as quick it leaves
its been a long time since she done
her skin any wrong

she lifts up her eyes
eyes so chocolate brown
they scream at you,
Beautiful Sadness...






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Re: Beautiful Sadness (User Rating: 1 )
by Living_In_My_Dream on Monday, 28th June 2004 @ 07:45:13 PM AEST
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wow its almost like a song I liked this a lot it had a lot of heartfelt but sad emotion in it...really a good read I liked it a lot...keep it up keep it coming...

much love,
Dani

a beautiful write and yes I have seen beautiful sadness in someones eyes...*sigh* keep it up...


Re: Beautiful Sadness (User Rating: 1 )
by Essentially9 on Monday, 28th June 2004 @ 10:22:54 PM AEST
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amazing write.


Re: Beautiful Sadness (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Monday, 28th June 2004 @ 10:47:32 PM AEST
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wonderful title, wonderful image


Re: Beautiful Sadness (User Rating: 1 )
by BrandySwanson on Wednesday, 30th June 2004 @ 02:45:51 PM AEST
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great poem loved the image too good job

Brandy




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