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eyes that bleed colorless tears,
ears that hear nothing but worthless obnoxious sound
lips that taste the saltiest blood
- and a body that is ready to break down.

I WiSH-
for a life full of mislead adventures,
for a reason to want to wake up
for the love of my life to find me
- and hold me until my last breath is released.

I GiVe-
you, my every waking moment,
my last kiss before my world ends
a handful of my unwanted possessions
- and this poison laced love note.

I HoPe-
your death is quick and painless,
it's spent wollowing your own self-righteous pity
for one day spent removed from you grasp
- and the end of this to digest my withered soul.

Someone once asked me,
The meaning of life-
I told them; search for truth
They thought my answer childish and immature
- but when judgement day arrived; they suffocated on all of their lies.

The meaning of life ... is love.
The moral of life ... this is all a sick joke.
So, let's all suffocate ... together.
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SuFFoCaTioN

Contributed by xslashxprettyxskinx on Monday, 28th June 2004 @ 03:55:24 PM in AEST
Topic: selfstruggles

I HaVe-
eyes that bleed colorless tears,
ears that hear nothing but worthless obnoxious sound
lips that taste the saltiest blood
- and a body that is ready to break down.

I WiSH-
for a life full of mislead adventures,
for a reason to want to wake up
for the love of my life to find me
- and hold me until my last breath is released.

I GiVe-
you, my every waking moment,
my last kiss before my world ends
a handful of my unwanted possessions
- and this poison laced love note.

I HoPe-
your death is quick and painless,
it's spent wollowing your own self-righteous pity
for one day spent removed from you grasp
- and the end of this to digest my withered soul.

Someone once asked me,
The meaning of life-
I told them; search for truth
They thought my answer childish and immature
- but when judgement day arrived; they suffocated on all of their lies.

The meaning of life ... is love.
The moral of life ... this is all a sick joke.
So, let's all suffocate ... together.

Copyright © xslashxprettyxskinx ... [ 2004-06-28 15:55:24]
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Re: SuFFoCaTioN (User Rating: 1 )
by deathdrop on Monday, 28th June 2004 @ 04:01:31 PM AEST
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there's a great deal of meaning in this!
it's put together really well.
i found it enjoying to read.

Re: SuFFoCaTioN (User Rating: 1 )
by Vitreous_Soul on Monday, 28th June 2004 @ 04:42:35 PM AEST
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So emotional, so tortured...I don't know of anyone else who could capture this in such a personal (and original) way. Expertly written and heart-piercing, thanks for sharing this with all of us.

Crying blood,
-V.S. ( 090404 )

Re: SuFFoCaTioN (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Monday, 28th June 2004 @ 05:56:04 PM AEST
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I was left estranged a little bit at the end, but I guess its grown on me as I have pins and needles from leaning on my arm in one position for too long, reading it.

All I can truly say, is that its a daunting, imposing and sobering presentation of your world, to one who cannot conceive it without prompting.

Commendable write, from the spice of survival.

Re: SuFFoCaTioN (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Monday, 28th June 2004 @ 10:46:15 PM AEST
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I HaVe-
eyes that bleed colorless tears,

Thought this was a very strong image -
nice work

Re: SuFFoCaTioN (User Rating: 1 )
by ladyfawn on Tuesday, 29th June 2004 @ 11:25:18 AM AEST
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i have....... i wish........ i give........ i hope........ beautifully written, captivating poem.......... so basically you poisioned the love that did you wrong but the moral is more than truth seeking, but love itself, very clever lindsey:) hugs n' love nessa

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Re: SuFFoCaTioN (User Rating: 1 )
by pixie on Tuesday, 29th June 2004 @ 12:26:49 PM AEST
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wow, one of the best I've read in awhile

pixie xx

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