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Array ( [sid] => 54028 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => Better off without me [time] => 2004-06-28 15:42:03 [hometext] => self explaintory in all...read and comment thanks...(oo and its just a poem) [bodytext] => My life leads to nowhere
I have no place to go
I run and I hide
Everything moving so slow
If I were to vanish
No one would care
Things would be normal
As if I were never there
Everything would be better without me
It's time for me to disappear
The things that were once foggy
Are now crystal clear
Pulling up the sleeve of my hoodie
And closing my eyes
I think of my life
I remember all the lies
Slicing into my wrist
Not shedding a tear
The pain is unnoticable
Not a worry or fear
My mind goes blank
For once things feel right
No longer a clutter of colors
Just seeing in black and white
I drop my arm
A puddle of blood forming on the floor
I watch myself bleed
Knowing that soon I would be no more
As I let myself go
A tear drops from my eye
It's not that I'm in regret
Just that I could never say bye
I had no one to love
I was always alone
No one may understand, but hopefully they will see
I had to go... because it's just better off without me.

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Better off without me

Contributed by Living_In_My_Dream on Monday, 28th June 2004 @ 03:42:03 PM in AEST
Topic: Suicide



My life leads to nowhere
I have no place to go
I run and I hide
Everything moving so slow
If I were to vanish
No one would care
Things would be normal
As if I were never there
Everything would be better without me
It's time for me to disappear
The things that were once foggy
Are now crystal clear
Pulling up the sleeve of my hoodie
And closing my eyes
I think of my life
I remember all the lies
Slicing into my wrist
Not shedding a tear
The pain is unnoticable
Not a worry or fear
My mind goes blank
For once things feel right
No longer a clutter of colors
Just seeing in black and white
I drop my arm
A puddle of blood forming on the floor
I watch myself bleed
Knowing that soon I would be no more
As I let myself go
A tear drops from my eye
It's not that I'm in regret
Just that I could never say bye
I had no one to love
I was always alone
No one may understand, but hopefully they will see
I had to go... because it's just better off without me.





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Re: Better off without me (User Rating: 1 )
by deathdrop on Monday, 28th June 2004 @ 03:58:32 PM AEST
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IT'S TOUCHING AND POWERFUL!
but beautiful in it's own little way.
i love this so much, i can't wait to see more work of yours!!!


Re: Better off without me (User Rating: 1 )
by TheLastStringCut on Monday, 28th June 2004 @ 07:02:32 PM AEST
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Aawww, that almost made me cry! That was a great write hun, great job! Well written... and very emotional, I've felt the same before. Bravo!

-Jeff


Re: Better off without me (User Rating: 1 )
by rugby_player on Monday, 28th June 2004 @ 07:16:41 PM AEST
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hmmmm what to say oh yeah...You better not f******g disappear.....I know its just a poem but still...anywho down the the reason for the comments...another great one bravo.......your writing so deep and thought provoking. grat job


Re: Better off without me (User Rating: 1 )
by brew on Monday, 28th June 2004 @ 08:09:36 PM AEST
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Very in depth.......Nice writing, but sad.!


Re: Better off without me (User Rating: 1 )
by xxbreathlessx on Monday, 28th June 2004 @ 09:20:48 PM AEST
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wow thats amazing wirting..and trust me i will miss you and your incredible writing skills!!


Re: Better off without me (User Rating: 1 )
by apollo on Tuesday, 29th June 2004 @ 05:14:24 AM AEST
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im glad its just a poem because this is very real. i hope you dont really feel like this because life can be tough and sometimes it pushs us over the edge. you sound like an amazing person, dont do anything crazy. take care.

brandon


Re: Better off without me (User Rating: 1 )
by pixie on Tuesday, 29th June 2004 @ 12:27:46 PM AEST
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very sad, *hugs you*

pixie xx




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