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Array ( [sid] => 5402 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => Bleed [time] => 2002-10-22 09:00:00 [hometext] => [bodytext] => fire is burning, raging in my veins
whipping you repeatedly, teaching you of pain
its endless in my dungeon of fear
you cry and cry, but i never shed a tear
trynig to escape i beat you worse
your screams once so loud, now so coarse
i have never shown you the slightest pity
take it right, have some dignity
escape is futile, you say im vile
you had ths coming to you dont act like a child
my wrath i lay on you, nothing you can do
dont ask what you did, but who
who did you screw to suffer so much
or who you hurt with that tempting touch
you should know who, now bleed
bleed from the scar ill never stitch
wasnt the torture rack enough
you think your strong now, you think your tough
hey Ill call your bluff
maybe you want it harder, do you like it rough
fired brand i seel you as mine
your flowing blood gives off a subtle shine
things could have turned out right with time
but no you you did this crime
its time to pay, time to pray, wanna play
cmonj show me what you got
you can try and try in this battle fought
but the winner you are not
ill be laughing cause youll be shot
hope you like it in hell, i bet its hot
a confession is all i ask and need
i hear you plea and you'll still bleed [comments] => 6 [counter] => 235 [topic] => 43 [informant] => crucifixioncross [notes] => .....edited by mod_6....29-03-04 [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 10 [ratings] => 3 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => oops )
Bleed

Contributed by crucifixioncross on Tuesday, 22nd October 2002 @ 09:00:00 AM in AEST
Topic: oops



fire is burning, raging in my veins
whipping you repeatedly, teaching you of pain
its endless in my dungeon of fear
you cry and cry, but i never shed a tear
trynig to escape i beat you worse
your screams once so loud, now so coarse
i have never shown you the slightest pity
take it right, have some dignity
escape is futile, you say im vile
you had ths coming to you dont act like a child
my wrath i lay on you, nothing you can do
dont ask what you did, but who
who did you screw to suffer so much
or who you hurt with that tempting touch
you should know who, now bleed
bleed from the scar ill never stitch
wasnt the torture rack enough
you think your strong now, you think your tough
hey Ill call your bluff
maybe you want it harder, do you like it rough
fired brand i seel you as mine
your flowing blood gives off a subtle shine
things could have turned out right with time
but no you you did this crime
its time to pay, time to pray, wanna play
cmonj show me what you got
you can try and try in this battle fought
but the winner you are not
ill be laughing cause youll be shot
hope you like it in hell, i bet its hot
a confession is all i ask and need
i hear you plea and you'll still bleed




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Re: Bleed (User Rating: 0 )
by Former_Member on Saturday, 26th October 2002 @ 07:13:34 AM AEST
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Awesome. I liked this one a lot. This person needs to suffer. They need to be taught a lesson. They need to see the error of their ways. Until then, make them BLEED!


Re: Bleed (User Rating: 1 )
by OreO on Friday, 8th November 2002 @ 02:39:10 PM AEST
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I disagree with the anonymous
commentor, i don't beleive a person
needs to suffer this way. But it is
a very painful heartfelt poem
that i enjoyed reading
Thanks for sharing it
Keep em' coming
.::´¯`·..· OreO·..·´¯`::.


Re: Bleed (User Rating: 1 )
by lost_word on Thursday, 14th November 2002 @ 03:27:25 PM AEST
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this is very interesting, it seemed like a comtinuation of love part 1 seeing is how u got violent in the end.. i have a poem like this but i wasnt brave enough to post it.. maybe i will now..

lost_word


Re: Bleed (User Rating: 1 )
by Rakerman1999 on Friday, 15th November 2002 @ 11:02:06 AM AEST
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Great write...And a great expression of your rage.. Well done!!


Re: Bleed (User Rating: 1 )
by cryingonmyporch on Wednesday, 27th November 2002 @ 12:45:47 AM AEST
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very nice I like.
amy

Oh yes it was my full name
Amy


Re: Bleed (User Rating: 1 )
by capergirl_23 on Wednesday, 15th January 2003 @ 09:53:59 AM AEST
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Wow.. I read all your poems posted here, and I think you are great at unleashing your feelings and thoughts in your poetry. They may seem pretty harsh to some, but I like how you do not hold anything back within them based on others' thoughts. Really great poetry! Like how you word things as well. Look forward to reading more of your work!




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