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Array ( [sid] => 53998 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => A Cold Fear [time] => 2004-06-28 11:08:00 [hometext] => This poem will speak for it's self. [bodytext] => Pain and suffering is what grabs hold
No emontion or feeling,growing cold.
Darkness and fear,not knowing where to turn
My heart and stomach begin to churn.

You have taken what's left inside
And broke it all when you lied.
We could have had it all together
It could have been you and me forever.

Now I feel I can't go on anymore
My head,heart and soul are broken to the core.
Wanting a hole to crawl into and hide
Needing my life to slow and subside.

It now feels like my heart is open,bleeding,raw
That every feeling and thought was a flaw.
Feeling that I am nobody and nothing
Wanting to be someone and something.

So now I close my eyes and pray
That this misery will not stay.
Someday I will break free
One day I will find the real me. [comments] => 3 [counter] => 302 [topic] => 13 [informant] => Monkeybones99 [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 5 [ratings] => 1 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => DarkPoetry )

A Cold Fear

Contributed by Monkeybones99 on Monday, 28th June 2004 @ 11:08:00 AM in AEST
Topic: DarkPoetry

Pain and suffering is what grabs hold
No emontion or feeling,growing cold.
Darkness and fear,not knowing where to turn
My heart and stomach begin to churn.

You have taken what's left inside
And broke it all when you lied.
We could have had it all together
It could have been you and me forever.

Now I feel I can't go on anymore
My head,heart and soul are broken to the core.
Wanting a hole to crawl into and hide
Needing my life to slow and subside.

It now feels like my heart is open,bleeding,raw
That every feeling and thought was a flaw.
Feeling that I am nobody and nothing
Wanting to be someone and something.

So now I close my eyes and pray
That this misery will not stay.
Someday I will break free
One day I will find the real me.

Copyright © Monkeybones99 ... [ 2004-06-28 11:08:00]
(Date/Time posted on site)

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Re: A Cold Fear (User Rating: 1 )
by emystar on Monday, 28th June 2004 @ 11:24:23 AM AEST
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Sad but a good write.
huggs,
emy

Re: A Cold Fear (User Rating: 1 )
by pixie on Monday, 28th June 2004 @ 12:56:58 PM AEST
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very great write, but as Emy said very sad *hugs you*

pixie xx

Re: A Cold Fear (User Rating: 1 )
by xxbreathlessx on Wednesday, 30th June 2004 @ 08:35:26 PM AEST
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wow good poem

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