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Array ( [sid] => 53994 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => without you (remixed) [time] => 2004-06-28 10:40:29 [hometext] => enjoy [bodytext] => all the stupid **** you pulled off,i *******
hate you,too many confused thoughts
that fill this empty head,pick up my ****
and leave your ******* piece of **** memories

you wonder why i hate you this much,just
think about all the**** you did that *******
me off to no end,the memories of you are bull ****

i'm so happy i left your ****** up life
without you i've got my life back in order
so glad but yet still so ******* mad
alittle upset cuz i didn't do it sooner

i swear on my ******* life i don't need
you to survive,i've had too many oppertunities
to tell you to **** off,but i never did

i will never leave this door open just for you
i'll never welcome you back into this heart
you're not so smart,you never knew what to do

we'll never be barried as lovers
we'll never be barried as friends
we'll never be barried together

i'm so happy i left your ****** up life
without you i've got my life back in order
so glad but yet still so ******* mad
alittle upset cuz i didn't do it sooner

[comments] => 1 [counter] => 151 [topic] => 52 [informant] => cheech [notes] => Moderator 9 6/28/04 Bleep words [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 6 [ratings] => 2 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => goodbyepoetry )
without you (remixed)

Contributed by cheech on Monday, 28th June 2004 @ 10:40:29 AM in AEST
Topic: goodbyepoetry



all the stupid **** you pulled off,i *******
hate you,too many confused thoughts
that fill this empty head,pick up my ****
and leave your ******* piece of **** memories

you wonder why i hate you this much,just
think about all the**** you did that *******
me off to no end,the memories of you are bull ****

i'm so happy i left your ****** up life
without you i've got my life back in order
so glad but yet still so ******* mad
alittle upset cuz i didn't do it sooner

i swear on my ******* life i don't need
you to survive,i've had too many oppertunities
to tell you to **** off,but i never did

i will never leave this door open just for you
i'll never welcome you back into this heart
you're not so smart,you never knew what to do

we'll never be barried as lovers
we'll never be barried as friends
we'll never be barried together

i'm so happy i left your ****** up life
without you i've got my life back in order
so glad but yet still so ******* mad
alittle upset cuz i didn't do it sooner





Copyright © cheech ... [ 2004-06-28 10:40:29]
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Re: without you (remixed) (User Rating: 1 )
by Essentially9 on Wednesday, 15th December 2004 @ 09:20:34 PM AEST
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looks like moderator 9 was busy eh =] well i think the point can be made without cussing. poems that dont cuss when they could just shows to me that the writer knew that you can make a verse powerful without cussing. sort of like linkin park. they dont cuss in their songs.




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