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Array ( [sid] => 53987 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => A cut [time] => 2004-06-28 09:35:05 [hometext] => It's not a poem none of my stuff really is, just thoughts and stuff,and sumtimes i get lucky and it flows [bodytext] => The blood,silver racking across my skin,
no one understaing the feeling it gives me with in,
It won't let me go, I dont wan't to let go,
I want it so bad,
It makes me feel so good,
You might think it is sick or wrong,
But it's the one thing that keeps me strong,
Its like a drug,and im addicted.
And i dont ever wanna quit,
Iv never had this kinda problem,But it calms me,
But not wanting to stop something that hurts me is just not like me,
I hate myselfe and everything this has made me,
Somehow i love the feeling and i run back for more,
Everytime something gose wrong,
The razor save's me, I hate it but i love it,
Seeing the blood drip to the floor is a rush to me,
It send shivers down my spin,
It's a feeling noone will understaind , The high is only mine.

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A cut

Contributed by SkippysAm0r0n123 on Monday, 28th June 2004 @ 09:35:05 AM in AEST
Topic: Suicide

The blood,silver racking across my skin,
no one understaing the feeling it gives me with in,
It won't let me go, I dont wan't to let go,
I want it so bad,
It makes me feel so good,
You might think it is sick or wrong,
But it's the one thing that keeps me strong,
Its like a drug,and im addicted.
And i dont ever wanna quit,
Iv never had this kinda problem,But it calms me,
But not wanting to stop something that hurts me is just not like me,
I hate myselfe and everything this has made me,
Somehow i love the feeling and i run back for more,
Everytime something gose wrong,
The razor save's me, I hate it but i love it,
Seeing the blood drip to the floor is a rush to me,
It send shivers down my spin,
It's a feeling noone will understaind , The high is only mine.

Copyright © SkippysAm0r0n123 ... [ 2004-06-28 09:35:05]
(Date/Time posted on site)

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Re: A cut (User Rating: 1 )
by pixie on Monday, 28th June 2004 @ 09:55:27 AM AEST
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awwww this is so sad...... hope you feel better soon...

pixie xx

Re: A cut (User Rating: 1 )
by deathdrop on Monday, 28th June 2004 @ 10:00:27 AM AEST
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i know exactly where you're comming from!
i do it too, only i'm trying to quit, but i can't!!!!!
but are you getting any help, coz just hear me out! they will lock you up if you become rally bad!
and i mean that!
that's why i'm trying to quit!

... but yeah, i do know where you're comming from!
so if you ever wanna talk, i'm here.
ok?

this poem was really good!
very expressive, but fll of spelling mistakes though...
but i did like and enjoy reading it!

never foget, that you're never alone!

from deathdrop.

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