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Array ( [sid] => 53904 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => My Love, I'll Miss You [time] => 2004-06-27 14:29:19 [hometext] => Why can't we just be together? I'm sorry, my love but I fear that getting you away from your father is what I should do if I really love you. I want you to have a future. I'm sorry. I never thought I'd have to submit under this catagory... [bodytext] => Oh, my love,
my eyes cry
tormented seas of
devotion to you.
My soul screams
desperate pleas
to look upon you
once again.
My radiance,
why must you
constantly be dimmed by
such evil words
of those who should
care most about you?
My life, my hope,
I'll miss you forever,
and I will never forget
or get over you.
My heart will
crave your presence in it
until the day
I die. [comments] => 5 [counter] => 147 [topic] => 22 [informant] => WorthlesSanity666 [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 0 [ratings] => 0 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => LostLove )

My Love, I'll Miss You

Contributed by WorthlesSanity666 on Sunday, 27th June 2004 @ 02:29:19 PM in AEST
Topic: LostLove

Oh, my love,
my eyes cry
tormented seas of
devotion to you.
My soul screams
desperate pleas
to look upon you
once again.
My radiance,
why must you
constantly be dimmed by
such evil words
of those who should
care most about you?
My life, my hope,
I'll miss you forever,
and I will never forget
or get over you.
My heart will
crave your presence in it
until the day
I die.

Copyright © WorthlesSanity666 ... [ 2004-06-27 14:29:19]
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Re: My Love, I'll Miss You (User Rating: 1 )
by dandelions_fall_too on Sunday, 27th June 2004 @ 03:05:46 PM AEST
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Why should she listen to the words of her father over those of love, true love.
Find other ways for you guys to be togather and think of other possible solutions before separating her from her father.Wether it'd be at a public place, or anywhere were lovers can meet. True love will always survive beyond the words of others, dont forget that. Have your words be more powrful than her father's not in a demanding way, but in a way that you never leave her toughts.
I'm glad i got to read your poem.

Re: My Love, I'll Miss You (User Rating: 1 )
by bobotheclown on Sunday, 27th June 2004 @ 06:00:42 PM AEST
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this was beautifully written and tormentingly sad.

Bobo (Joel)

Re: My Love, I'll Miss You (User Rating: 1 )
by faffeee on Sunday, 27th June 2004 @ 06:43:56 PM AEST
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simple, but way too true. good write. basically, it made me sad - and thats what good poetry does, it makes you feel. xx

Re: My Love, I'll Miss You (User Rating: 1 )
by pixie on Monday, 28th June 2004 @ 11:11:20 AM AEST
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awww this was really emotional and very sad, you have writtne it very well never the less

pixie xx

Re: My Love, I'll Miss You (User Rating: 1 )
by xXxFaygoFetishxXx on Tuesday, 29th June 2004 @ 10:11:05 PM AEST
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I can completely relate.
I love this poem.
Thank you for the comment on mine...
and when I do cut.
I do hide it from certain people... I don't want to hurt them because I hurt myself..
Keep writing
::Elizabeth::

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