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Many want the simple times,But it is the thoughts in your mind! Many create awhole life fantasy beginning with love and ending in ecstasy.
As time goes on the mirror changes and then we find our life re-arranges
So thru this mirror make it be the times of life that set you free
Be it young, or be it old, Find the one who keeps the hold Let the heart flow with out standing emotions
Keep all intact that there are several potions
Many find they left behind, The greatest test of all : Entwined [comments] => 7 [counter] => 232 [topic] => 14 [informant] => brew [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 25 [ratings] => 6 [editpoem] => 0 [associated] => [topicname] => DreamsandWishes )

Looking thru a mirror

Contributed by brew on Sunday, 27th June 2004 @ 01:52:21 PM in AEST
Topic: DreamsandWishes

Looking through a Mirror, at the world;shows you images, all untold
Many want the simple times,But it is the thoughts in your mind! Many create awhole life fantasy beginning with love and ending in ecstasy.
As time goes on the mirror changes and then we find our life re-arranges
So thru this mirror make it be the times of life that set you free
Be it young, or be it old, Find the one who keeps the hold Let the heart flow with out standing emotions
Keep all intact that there are several potions
Many find they left behind, The greatest test of all : Entwined

Copyright © brew ... [ 2004-06-27 13:52:21]
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Re: Looking thru a mirror (User Rating: 1 )
by deadbloodyrose on Sunday, 27th June 2004 @ 02:10:24 PM AEST
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wonderfully written it flows really well.. nice job.. AMI JO

Re: Looking thru a mirror (User Rating: 1 )
by dandelions_fall_too on Sunday, 27th June 2004 @ 03:30:31 PM AEST
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Thanks for writing this. You have no idea how it's just what i needed to set my mind straight and fix somethings upon my life.

Re: Looking thru a mirror (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Sunday, 20th November 2005 @ 09:03:17 PM AEST
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When I look into the mirror mirror on the wall, it sometimes startles me, because I am getting older, my facial picture has changed. It does help though to look into the mirror, it does tell the truth, sometimes our mirrors in our minds do not always tell the truth, because we do not like change, and sometimes changes can create fears. Many counselors, psychiatrists use the mirror test in order for you to look and to learn who you truly are, and to keep one from making up what he/she thinks she is inside of her body mirror, the brain, which sometimes can either help us to bring us up, or drag us down... Well this day has been a very brilliant learning process I have undertaken and have found many beautiful poems with wonderful advice. Very, very nice poem here... RL

Re: Looking thru a mirror (User Rating: 1 )
by yangdantien on Thursday, 18th January 2007 @ 09:58:15 PM AEST
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This is a good first post and I like how you blended the metaphor of reflection into the physical state of being entwined, a word I totally dig.

Peace
AJ

Re: Looking thru a mirror (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Monday, 12th February 2007 @ 09:59:30 PM AEST
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Such depth and insight....this one just sets my mind to wandering...and that is good!!

Re: Looking thru a mirror (User Rating: 1 )
by TheGrimReapersHourglass on Tuesday, 4th December 2007 @ 10:19:36 AM AEST
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I Saw A Naked Cow Girl On The Celling?not really-The Man In The Mirror-We Broke Our Mirrors-Mirror Mirrior On The Wall Whos The Farest Of Them All-this poem brought back memeries of a bull riders tool at six seven seven fourty two made by me well somewhat and alone what I saw In the mirror the building alone was one hundred thirty one years old keep up -Stand In The Place Were You Work Now Face West-Comment from The Grim Reaper,DevilsPriest KnownAs LORD,Denver L.Jr.

Re: Looking thru a mirror (User Rating: 1 )
by law_glen18 on Tuesday, 1st January 2008 @ 12:46:03 PM AEST
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Great write, feel the words right down to my soul.
Awesome work Brew!!!

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