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Array ( [sid] => 53898 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => Girl On the Swing [time] => 2004-06-27 12:38:14 [hometext] => Didn't know which topic to put this under... but please let me know what you think?.... [bodytext] => The little girl on the swing,
Hasn’t a care in the world as she sings,
Her long, golden flowing hair,
And her porcelain skin that’s so fair.

Catches your eye and makes you look,
She resembles a princess from a fairytale book,
Her eyes are a perfect sky blue,
They stare deeply and look right through.

Your soul, but you are so enchanted,
That you stay there firmly planted,
Watching this beautiful little girl,
As she dances and she twirls.

But something isn’t quite right,
As you become rigid with fright,
You remember where you’ve seen her before,
Standing at your bedroom door.

You’ve been woke up by this song,
That stays with you all day long,
The little girl is not in your dream,
Although that is the way it may seem.

She died along, long time ago,
And she floats to and fro,
The garden and her old bedroom,
Her ghostly figure forever looms.

You see she used to live right here,
And that is why she likes to stay near,
She likes to keep watch on this house,
Creeping at night, as quiet as a mouse.

Don’t be afraid she’ll do you no harm,
Her spirit is at peace and so calm,
Remember to this little girl,
This house was her whole world.

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Girl On the Swing

Contributed by pixie on Sunday, 27th June 2004 @ 12:38:14 PM in AEST
Topic: DreamsandWishes

The little girl on the swing,
Hasn’t a care in the world as she sings,
Her long, golden flowing hair,
And her porcelain skin that’s so fair.

Catches your eye and makes you look,
She resembles a princess from a fairytale book,
Her eyes are a perfect sky blue,
They stare deeply and look right through.

Your soul, but you are so enchanted,
That you stay there firmly planted,
Watching this beautiful little girl,
As she dances and she twirls.

But something isn’t quite right,
As you become rigid with fright,
You remember where you’ve seen her before,
Standing at your bedroom door.

You’ve been woke up by this song,
That stays with you all day long,
The little girl is not in your dream,
Although that is the way it may seem.

She died along, long time ago,
And she floats to and fro,
The garden and her old bedroom,
Her ghostly figure forever looms.

You see she used to live right here,
And that is why she likes to stay near,
She likes to keep watch on this house,
Creeping at night, as quiet as a mouse.

Don’t be afraid she’ll do you no harm,
Her spirit is at peace and so calm,
Remember to this little girl,
This house was her whole world.

Copyright Â© pixie ... [ 2004-06-27 12:38:14]
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Re: Girl On the Swing (User Rating: 1 )
by linagalMBfan01 on Sunday, 27th June 2004 @ 12:56:25 PM AEST
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it is a great poem!!!
i think it should have been put under life poetry.
great job and keep writing.

lina

Re: Girl On the Swing (User Rating: 1 )
by RhythmBndt on Sunday, 27th June 2004 @ 01:08:22 PM AEST
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Great poem :)

Re: Girl On the Swing (User Rating: 1 )
by lostinmyself on Sunday, 27th June 2004 @ 01:45:25 PM AEST
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This is brilliant...
I've never been able to write dream poetry, but i think this is fantastic.
Slightly sad too.
Is this true? Because i believe in ghosts.
Good flow and good write,
Phil xxx

Re: Girl On the Swing (User Rating: 1 )
by deadbloodyrose on Sunday, 27th June 2004 @ 02:12:53 PM AEST
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you did a really nice job of writing this piece.. your descripitons are very vivid and it all flows so well.. AMI JO

Re: Girl On the Swing (User Rating: 1 )
by ladyfawn on Sunday, 27th June 2004 @ 03:10:06 PM AEST
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excellent poem, so well written, with a captivating story, ...as you asked, i would put it under dark poetry:) hugs n' love nessa

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Re: Girl On the Swing (User Rating: 1 )
by freespirit on Sunday, 27th June 2004 @ 03:36:58 PM AEST
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Excllent poem you are a true poet
love reading your poetry have a good day hugs *freespirt*

Re: Girl On the Swing (User Rating: 1 )
by Jenni_K on Sunday, 27th June 2004 @ 04:39:20 PM AEST
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Oh My Little Pixie Grrl....this is so captivating... Brought back such great memories to me....
Thanks for sharing...
Hugs
Jenni

Re: Girl On the Swing (User Rating: 1 )
by blueheart on Sunday, 27th June 2004 @ 09:52:12 PM AEST
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Ah pixie, you've done it again.
Very good job.

*Smiles*

Re: Girl On the Swing (User Rating: 1 )
by venkat on Monday, 28th June 2004 @ 06:22:46 AM AEST
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Heart touching, mind captivating very good work..welldone my friend..venkat

Re: Girl On the Swing (User Rating: 1 )
by Luinil on Monday, 28th June 2004 @ 09:30:36 AM AEST
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very pretty*

Re: Girl On the Swing (User Rating: 1 )
by yellow_sundragon on Monday, 28th June 2004 @ 12:29:57 PM AEST
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woah.... wow.... this is.... amazing.... it really is.... speechless....

Jaime

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