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Array ( [sid] => 53880 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => emily [time] => 2004-06-27 08:13:23 [hometext] => i,v tried so hard [bodytext] => dear emily
i,m so sorry for what i put you through
i know you cant forgive me for what i did to you

i made you feel so alone
i just left you when you said you wanted me to stay
i,m so sorry for letting you do those things that day

dear emily
i never wanted it to end this way
i should have never left your needy side
but i was to selfish to stay

oh emily you said you,d be o.k
why did i listen to those words
but i trusted you and walked away

she said she never meant to take so many
but her thoughts became unsteady
she said she needed me and i wasnt there
but i guess i was too busy in my own demise to think for a moment and care

dear emily i,m so sorry
please find it in your heart to forgive me
i never ever left your side
until i started to lose my sanity
they said i was getting better
i didnt think so
that day i thought of myself wallowed in my self pitty
now i have nothing not even my sanity

dear emily i,m so sorry please find it in you soul to forgive me




[comments] => 4 [counter] => 177 [topic] => 16 [informant] => grip-wth-broken-fingers [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 4 [ratings] => 1 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => FriendshipPoetry )
emily

Contributed by grip-wth-broken-fingers on Sunday, 27th June 2004 @ 08:13:23 AM in AEST
Topic: FriendshipPoetry



dear emily
i,m so sorry for what i put you through
i know you cant forgive me for what i did to you

i made you feel so alone
i just left you when you said you wanted me to stay
i,m so sorry for letting you do those things that day

dear emily
i never wanted it to end this way
i should have never left your needy side
but i was to selfish to stay

oh emily you said you,d be o.k
why did i listen to those words
but i trusted you and walked away

she said she never meant to take so many
but her thoughts became unsteady
she said she needed me and i wasnt there
but i guess i was too busy in my own demise to think for a moment and care

dear emily i,m so sorry
please find it in your heart to forgive me
i never ever left your side
until i started to lose my sanity
they said i was getting better
i didnt think so
that day i thought of myself wallowed in my self pitty
now i have nothing not even my sanity

dear emily i,m so sorry please find it in you soul to forgive me








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Re: emily (User Rating: 1 )
by frejya on Sunday, 27th June 2004 @ 08:52:44 AM AEST
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a very touching piece
well done

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Re: emily (User Rating: 1 )
by apollo on Sunday, 27th June 2004 @ 09:15:54 AM AEST
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emily is one lucky person. for someone like yourself to write something for this girl is one of the most wonderful things a person can do for another. emily will realize the love in your heart and she will come back to you, it has to be this way! take care and just keep your head up, keep shooting for the stars and emily will come back, this i am sure.

brandon


Re: emily (User Rating: 1 )
by sicknivesevered on Sunday, 27th June 2004 @ 09:20:05 AM AEST
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Grooviness. I can sing the line in my head: "Dear Emily, I'm so sorry - Please find it in your heart to forgive me". I love the way the Es flow throughout the motion. Good piece.


Re: emily (User Rating: 1 )
by hooray_its_jen on Sunday, 27th June 2004 @ 01:37:51 PM AEST
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If this doesn't make her forgive you nothing will. This is soooo sweet, and if I was her I'd be crying if I read it. Great job, this is a wonderful poem! Thanks for sharing.

Blessings
Love, Jen




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