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There is nothing to say
My heart bleeds
From what I did to thee
From what you did to me

My heart bleeds
From of what you told me
I am nothing
In the eyes of the beholder
I betrayed you
In every way I could
And now I pay
For what I did to you

And I can't believe
What you believe me to be
Perception is everything
To you I'll never be
Anything

My heart bleeds
From what you believe
My mind sees
What you believe
My soul's free
To leave me

I bleed for release
Because I can't live
With what I did [comments] => 7 [counter] => 198 [topic] => 48 [informant] => essentially9 [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 10 [ratings] => 2 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => EmotionalPoetry )

My Heart Bleeds

Contributed by essentially9 on Saturday, 26th June 2004 @ 10:59:43 PM in AEST
Topic: EmotionalPoetry

My Heart Bleeds

There is nothing to say
My heart bleeds
From what I did to thee
From what you did to me

My heart bleeds
From of what you told me
I am nothing
In the eyes of the beholder
I betrayed you
In every way I could
And now I pay
For what I did to you

And I can't believe
What you believe me to be
Perception is everything
To you I'll never be
Anything

My heart bleeds
From what you believe
My mind sees
What you believe
My soul's free
To leave me

I bleed for release
Because I can't live
With what I did

Copyright © essentially9 ... [ 2004-06-26 22:59:43]
(Date/Time posted on site)

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Re: My Heart Bleeds (User Rating: 1 )
by TheVoice on Saturday, 26th June 2004 @ 11:16:21 PM AEST
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VERY powerful write. No one is perfect. Bad judgement, poor decisions, wrong doings are going to happen in life. Learn from your mistakes to be the beter person you want to be.

The Voice

Re: My Heart Bleeds (User Rating: 1 )
by emystar on Saturday, 26th June 2004 @ 11:25:34 PM AEST
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Take it easy on yourself, please.
We are all jus humaan and we all make mistakes. Who ever said these things to u should go take a long hard look in the mirror.U should tell this person "Let the first one among us with out sin let him cast the first stone. They were gonna stone the women in the bible and when Jesus said that then he put um all in their place as we are born into sin.
It doesn't matter what u did no one has the right to make u fell this way. If we all gave up 'cause we wronged someone then we would all be dead.
So please take it easy on yourself.
Luv, huggs, courage,
emy

Re: My Heart Bleeds (User Rating: 1 )
by deadbloodyrose on Saturday, 26th June 2004 @ 11:28:14 PM AEST
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nice write..powerful.. everyone makes mistakes in life.. thats how we learn.. we wouldnt get anywhere without learning lifes lessons on the way..i hope everything turns out alright.. take care.. AMI JO

Re: My Heart Bleeds (User Rating: 1 )
by Dereku on Sunday, 27th June 2004 @ 12:32:02 AM AEST
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I somewhat agree with my other commentors above me. Whoever said this to make you feel this way...well...forget about it. Don't be so hard on yourself, and don't worry about it so much. Sometimes, you gotta take things in stride, and be sure to throw them behind you on your trail to HAPPINESS!!!! ^_^

To quote the great Bobby McFerrin

Don't worry, be happy!

Re: My Heart Bleeds (User Rating: 1 )
by angelav on Sunday, 27th June 2004 @ 02:50:12 AM AEST
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Forgive yourself. It's all good. All things are for a reason...and sometimes what doesn't kill you makes you stronger. Trust me, I know. Forgiveness is a hard nut to crack, but worth it in the end.

Re: My Heart Bleeds (User Rating: 1 )
by ladyfawn on Sunday, 27th June 2004 @ 10:24:08 AM AEST
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awww...... we all make mistakes, beautifully expression of feelings here, big hugs n' love nessa

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Re: My Heart Bleeds (User Rating: 1 )
by pixie on Sunday, 27th June 2004 @ 11:16:30 AM AEST
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you shouldnt be too hard oin yourself, as we as humans make mistakes and we learn by them..... takecare, you written this very well, and honestly

pixie xx

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