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Array ( [sid] => 53846 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => Goodbye Letter [time] => 2004-06-26 21:51:13 [hometext] => I thought of suicide once after 23 attempts I finally got help. [bodytext] => To my dearest mother I write this poem not to upset you, but to let you know that a huge chunk of my broken battered, and fragile heart. That belongs to you not to my father, not to my brother, not even to me, but only to you. For the tears you are now crying aren’t of joy or of happiness but of pain. But you should know that they shouldn’t be painful tears for I am always with you. I am the sun touching your checks. I am the wind that blows your hair softly. I will always be carried in your heart. Kiss my lifeless, purple, lips one last time before you put me to rest. We are just parting temporally for I will see you again. I will be in heaven and in hell. This is not good-bye but more like good night. I shall see you again in heaven and in hell. In our hearts we will always feel and see each other whether physically or mentally. I will always follow you.
To my Brother I never really got to know you. I knew you were a great guy. I wanted to see and know more about you. Remember the times when we would fight and beat each other up. Remember my first date you checked Jeff over. You got to know him. Please don’t shed tears of sorrow for I am with you no matter what. For I love you. Kiss my purple, lifeless lips one last time before you lay me to rest. Part of my soul is in your soul. Remember dad’s favorite line from A Patriot Story. Humor will get you far in life. Use your head your going to be very successful shedding tears over me won’t help you. I will always be in heaven and in hell. I will always be with you no matter what.
To my father, Dad what’s there to say except remember all the stupid things I have done in my life. You have repaired my broken, battered, and crushed heart so many times that I’ve lost count. I am going to part early but I will be here with you in sprit. Kiss my purple, lifeless lips one last time before you lay me to rest. It’s not like your burring your daughter for your not burring anyone. For I am going to stay with you and watch over you. Maybe I haven’t made the best decisions in my life but I think this is the best or the worst depending on how you look at this. I will be in heaven and in hell.
So now I part form my beloved family but always remember that this is not good-bye. I will always be with you in your hearts, the wind, and the sun, in sprit and in your souls. Good-bye for now. I will see you again in heaven and in hell.
With Great Love
-Amy- [comments] => 3 [counter] => 183 [topic] => 36 [informant] => ale5shr [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 20 [ratings] => 4 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => Suicide )
Goodbye Letter

Contributed by ale5shr on Saturday, 26th June 2004 @ 09:51:13 PM in AEST
Topic: Suicide



To my dearest mother I write this poem not to upset you, but to let you know that a huge chunk of my broken battered, and fragile heart. That belongs to you not to my father, not to my brother, not even to me, but only to you. For the tears you are now crying aren’t of joy or of happiness but of pain. But you should know that they shouldn’t be painful tears for I am always with you. I am the sun touching your checks. I am the wind that blows your hair softly. I will always be carried in your heart. Kiss my lifeless, purple, lips one last time before you put me to rest. We are just parting temporally for I will see you again. I will be in heaven and in hell. This is not good-bye but more like good night. I shall see you again in heaven and in hell. In our hearts we will always feel and see each other whether physically or mentally. I will always follow you.
To my Brother I never really got to know you. I knew you were a great guy. I wanted to see and know more about you. Remember the times when we would fight and beat each other up. Remember my first date you checked Jeff over. You got to know him. Please don’t shed tears of sorrow for I am with you no matter what. For I love you. Kiss my purple, lifeless lips one last time before you lay me to rest. Part of my soul is in your soul. Remember dad’s favorite line from A Patriot Story. Humor will get you far in life. Use your head your going to be very successful shedding tears over me won’t help you. I will always be in heaven and in hell. I will always be with you no matter what.
To my father, Dad what’s there to say except remember all the stupid things I have done in my life. You have repaired my broken, battered, and crushed heart so many times that I’ve lost count. I am going to part early but I will be here with you in sprit. Kiss my purple, lifeless lips one last time before you lay me to rest. It’s not like your burring your daughter for your not burring anyone. For I am going to stay with you and watch over you. Maybe I haven’t made the best decisions in my life but I think this is the best or the worst depending on how you look at this. I will be in heaven and in hell.
So now I part form my beloved family but always remember that this is not good-bye. I will always be with you in your hearts, the wind, and the sun, in sprit and in your souls. Good-bye for now. I will see you again in heaven and in hell.
With Great Love
-Amy-




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Re: Goodbye Letter (User Rating: 1 )
by emystar on Saturday, 26th June 2004 @ 11:50:20 PM AEST
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This is so sad. I hope u mean u got help to keep from killing yourself instead u got help to do suicide. I pryay this is hindsight instead of fore site.
This write will bring anyone to tears.
huggs, luv, peace, hope,
emy


Re: Goodbye Letter (User Rating: 1 )
by pixie on Sunday, 27th June 2004 @ 11:35:33 AM AEST
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awwww Amy this brought a tear to my eye when I read it.... *hugs you* very, very heart wrenching write

pixie xx


Re: Goodbye Letter (User Rating: 1 )
by williamdye on Sunday, 27th June 2004 @ 04:14:25 PM AEST
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I submit gloomy poems and understand exactly how you feal and felt. This has brought a tear to my eye. A beautifully written piece, thank you.




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