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shall i surrender?
shall i play its Vicious game?
it chimes in my ears
Blows through the dark
Breathing in fears
Charming its talk
Coaxing up against me
Whispering in my ear
Dancing around me
As i dry up my tears
The singing is hypnotizing
but i believe im strong
Humming against me
i dare not sing its song
its tangling in my thoguhts
and for a moment im confused
one scratch is enough!
i will NO LONGER be its muse
no more tainted scars upon this arm
no more rain of blood
no more laughing away
pain that cuases my eyes to flood
so hear me now,
and hear me true
i will no longer be a victim
in this game for two....
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The Cutting Game

Contributed by xxbreathlessx on Saturday, 26th June 2004 @ 07:33:21 PM in AEST
Topic: EmotionalPoetry

evil calls my name
shall i surrender?
shall i play its Vicious game?
it chimes in my ears
Blows through the dark
Breathing in fears
Charming its talk
Coaxing up against me
Whispering in my ear
Dancing around me
As i dry up my tears
The singing is hypnotizing
but i believe im strong
Humming against me
i dare not sing its song
its tangling in my thoguhts
and for a moment im confused
one scratch is enough!
i will NO LONGER be its muse
no more tainted scars upon this arm
no more rain of blood
no more laughing away
pain that cuases my eyes to flood
so hear me now,
and hear me true
i will no longer be a victim
in this game for two....

Copyright © xxbreathlessx ... [ 2004-06-26 19:33:21]
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Re: The Cutting Game (User Rating: 1 )
by Living_In_My_Dream on Saturday, 26th June 2004 @ 08:15:25 PM AEST
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great write I liked this a lot and can truly relate if you read my poems youd know me and you have the same style in writing well keep it up and keep it coming...hold your head held high I liked it a lot...

much love,
Dani

Re: The Cutting Game (User Rating: 1 )
by pixie on Sunday, 27th June 2004 @ 11:43:16 AM AEST
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very powerful poem...... i love your style

pixie xx

Re: The Cutting Game (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Saturday, 3rd July 2004 @ 03:56:22 PM AEST
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I didnt know you were a cutter, breathless
this was painful for me because I cut too,
painful only because I could feel that cut you described and the pain you put across well.
Keep writing

PFR

Re: The Cutting Game (User Rating: 1 )
by oneteartofellpain on Tuesday, 6th July 2004 @ 04:11:57 PM AEST
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hollyyy geee-sus...ur poems are sooo breath takin i myself write stuff like this...i have one called "rusty razor blade" that was i think one of my first ones...but ur are so well writen n they make me feel where u commin from...good job..!!!!
bravo..to the power of 32948574867546546 lol
well time to go...love,
yazmin

Re: The Cutting Game (User Rating: 1 )
by Luinil on Thursday, 8th July 2004 @ 02:16:04 PM AEST
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you put that feeling into words very well..*

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