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The Fork
Contributed by
frejya
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Saturday, 26th June 2004 @ 06:10:21 AM in AEST
Topic:
LostLove
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That turn on this raod
Where we set apart
- Memorizing
This path with dead trees
These cuts in my feet
- Agonizing
Your past left so far
Your state, your day, if nice
- Mesmerizing
The pace of my brisk
With the pace of the wind
- Immobilizing
Infinity to be crossed
The hollow sky above
- Criticizing
A turn again met
Is so like that previous
- Realizing
Copyright ©
frejya
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2004-06-26 06:10:21]
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Re: The Fork
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by venkat on
Saturday, 26th June 2004 @ 06:36:07 AM AEST
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| Aww..simply wonderful..if you love to improve you can minimise the use "the" in most cases...O.k keep writing on.. venkat |
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Re: The Fork
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by Chaitnyanand on
Saturday, 26th June 2004 @ 06:38:21 AM AEST
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Dear Frejya,
Beautiful poem...had to read twice to get into the deeper meaning...nice write truly !!
Love & Peace !
Chait... |
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Re: The Fork
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by emystar on
Saturday, 26th June 2004 @ 07:05:38 AM AEST
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Very creative writing.
huggs,
emy |
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Re: The Fork
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by pixie on
Saturday, 26th June 2004 @ 10:33:51 AM AEST
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great poem,
pixie xx
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