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Array ( [sid] => 53741 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => Struggle of life [time] => 2004-06-26 00:25:39 [hometext] => I wrote this a week after i broke up with my girlfriend..not very good but comments are welcome [bodytext] => Sometimes i think
I think
This can't be all there is to life
There has to be more
I lost you
Now all i have is memories
I want you back
I don't want you back
I need you back
I don't need you back
These feelings
They are swimming around in my brain

Am i better off without you
Or do i need you to survive
So many people go through life alone
But god help it scares me
Alone for life
That can't be my fate
Can it be changed?
Maybe i'll end it
Just to stop the struggle

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Struggle of life

Contributed by rugby_player on Saturday, 26th June 2004 @ 12:25:39 AM in AEST
Topic: DarkPoetry

Sometimes i think
I think
This can't be all there is to life
There has to be more
I lost you
Now all i have is memories
I want you back
I don't want you back
I need you back
I don't need you back
These feelings
They are swimming around in my brain

Am i better off without you
Or do i need you to survive
So many people go through life alone
But god help it scares me
Alone for life
That can't be my fate
Can it be changed?
Maybe i'll end it
Just to stop the struggle

Copyright © rugby_player ... [ 2004-06-26 00:25:39]
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Re: Struggle of life (User Rating: 1 )
by Living_In_My_Dream on Saturday, 26th June 2004 @ 12:31:27 AM AEST
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wow, this went to much together your struggeling iwth your feelings but ***** off your not gonna end anything...lol you need to stay strong...and carry on..okie doke...!!!! well luv ya...ttyl

much love,
dani

Re: Struggle of life (User Rating: 1 )
by emystar on Saturday, 26th June 2004 @ 12:36:34 AM AEST
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We all get tired at our hand in life at times but there's reasons to keep on keeping on. To end it for a past luv would definently be aloss of good talent.
Hang tuff, my friend ''cause u never know what a new day will bring.
huggs,
emy

Re: Struggle of life (User Rating: 1 )
by holderofthestone on Saturday, 26th June 2004 @ 07:10:46 PM AEST
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I can totally relate with you here. sometimes it hard to even think straight when you lose that "someone" but your not alone, many people stuggle with not knowing what to do. stick with it and things will work out, another great write please keep em coming! A+++

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