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Array ( [sid] => 53740 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => True Love Does Die [time] => 2004-06-26 00:20:58 [hometext] => This is about my ex boyfriend Jay who i was in love with and still am. i have liked him for 5 years including the time we went out. [bodytext] => I didn't realize just how much you meant to me
But you changed my life dramatically
I never thought it would end the way it did that day
I didn't want to do it; I didn't know what to say.
But I said what was right and did what was wrong
Because ever since then me and you don't get along.
After being together for almost 7 months we were no longer going out,
But I quickly learned what true love was all about.
For something that I thought was too good to be true,
I can't believe I am the one who broke up with you.
I wouldn't do a thing to hurt you in anyway.
But I heard I did when I broke up with you that day.
If me and you had only talked things through
Then maybe right now I would still be with you.
But after I found out what you did
When I was near you always hid.
We never actually got a chance to sit and talk things through
That’s the reason I broke up with you.
I never got to tell you how I felt,
Or the way you would make my heart melt.
All you said was that it happened and you liked her in a way.
And that was it; there was nothing left to say.
We got off the phone and I started to cry,
There was nothing in the world I loved more, I wanted to die.
I laid down in bed and hugged jay bear,
And down my cheek there was a tear.
All I could think about was how happy I was when I was with you,
And wondered if you felt the same way too.
But then all I could picture was you and her lying down in the sand,
And then you two walking away hand in hand.
"You don’t understand, I don’t want to hurt you" that’s what you said before,
I don’t think anyone could ever hurt me more.
You hurt me so much you don’t understand,
How I miss just holding your hand.
I couldn't love anyone else as much as I loved you,
I wonder if you ever felt the way that I do.
Did you ever love me? Or was it just a lie?
Now I know true love does die.
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True Love Does Die

Contributed by RiZz on Saturday, 26th June 2004 @ 12:20:58 AM in AEST
Topic: LostLove



I didn't realize just how much you meant to me
But you changed my life dramatically
I never thought it would end the way it did that day
I didn't want to do it; I didn't know what to say.
But I said what was right and did what was wrong
Because ever since then me and you don't get along.
After being together for almost 7 months we were no longer going out,
But I quickly learned what true love was all about.
For something that I thought was too good to be true,
I can't believe I am the one who broke up with you.
I wouldn't do a thing to hurt you in anyway.
But I heard I did when I broke up with you that day.
If me and you had only talked things through
Then maybe right now I would still be with you.
But after I found out what you did
When I was near you always hid.
We never actually got a chance to sit and talk things through
That’s the reason I broke up with you.
I never got to tell you how I felt,
Or the way you would make my heart melt.
All you said was that it happened and you liked her in a way.
And that was it; there was nothing left to say.
We got off the phone and I started to cry,
There was nothing in the world I loved more, I wanted to die.
I laid down in bed and hugged jay bear,
And down my cheek there was a tear.
All I could think about was how happy I was when I was with you,
And wondered if you felt the same way too.
But then all I could picture was you and her lying down in the sand,
And then you two walking away hand in hand.
"You don’t understand, I don’t want to hurt you" that’s what you said before,
I don’t think anyone could ever hurt me more.
You hurt me so much you don’t understand,
How I miss just holding your hand.
I couldn't love anyone else as much as I loved you,
I wonder if you ever felt the way that I do.
Did you ever love me? Or was it just a lie?
Now I know true love does die.




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Re: True Love Does Die (User Rating: 1 )
by pixie on Saturday, 26th June 2004 @ 05:51:16 AM AEST
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awwww *hugs you* true love is kept alive in the heart sometimes, maybe you and this bloke weren't meant to be, I'm sure that in time your heart will become stronger and heal and then you will once again feel ready to look for someone to share your life with,

great write, very emotional..

pixie xx




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