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remembering our good times
with ripped up photographs
this broken heart gets me back in the game
feeling so cool, god Im so lame
if everything was left up to me
it would be left for you to do
dont foget when I slice my wrist
to dot my I's
starting over Im saying my goodbyes
please when I'm gone move on,
I want you to give up
just dont forget when I slice my wrist
to dot my I's
your the one
who Im saying my goodbyes
I'll love you forever,
I hate your guts
when my door opens,
thanks for helping
I hope you door shuts
I'm taking my life
I wanted to spend forver with you
god Id hate to be your wife
just trust me
when Im gone everything for you
will be better
so when I slice my wrist
and you dot my I's
I'd know then you read my
manipulating goodbyes
[comments] => 4 [counter] => 171 [topic] => 36 [informant] => Living_In_My_Dream [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 0 [ratings] => 0 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => Suicide )

Suicidal Manipulations

Contributed by Living_In_My_Dream on Friday, 25th June 2004 @ 11:13:09 PM in AEST
Topic: Suicide

I'm reminessing over our past
remembering our good times
with ripped up photographs
this broken heart gets me back in the game
feeling so cool, god Im so lame
if everything was left up to me
it would be left for you to do
dont foget when I slice my wrist
to dot my I's
starting over Im saying my goodbyes
please when I'm gone move on,
I want you to give up
just dont forget when I slice my wrist
to dot my I's
your the one
who Im saying my goodbyes
I'll love you forever,
I hate your guts
when my door opens,
thanks for helping
I hope you door shuts
I'm taking my life
I wanted to spend forver with you
god Id hate to be your wife
just trust me
when Im gone everything for you
will be better
so when I slice my wrist
and you dot my I's
I'd know then you read my
manipulating goodbyes

Copyright © Living_In_My_Dream ... [ 2004-06-25 23:13:09]
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Re: Suicidal Manipulations (User Rating: 1 )
by rugby_player on Friday, 25th June 2004 @ 11:40:48 PM AEST
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complex or at least for me but then again i'm not very smart.....but god job i liked this one made me think which can't be anything but good...its nice to hear those wheels turning...thanks for the great write kepp them coming

Re: Suicidal Manipulations (User Rating: 1 )
by bluoreo on Saturday, 26th June 2004 @ 04:49:05 AM AEST
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Again, another very cool/interesting write.

Re: Suicidal Manipulations (User Rating: 1 )
by pixie on Saturday, 26th June 2004 @ 06:17:38 AM AEST
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very deep poem.

pixie xx

Re: Suicidal Manipulations (User Rating: 1 )
by deadbloodyrose on Sunday, 27th June 2004 @ 12:53:43 AM AEST
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very strong and powerful.. well written.. you have talent and im glad you continue to post these poems so we can attempt to see what goes on in your life.. take care.. AMI JO

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