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I take my life with one last sigh.
I just hope I find a better place than I know.
A better place for me to go.
I can't think of another method to make this go away.
So I tell everybody that I love them on my last day.
I can't take this feeling on my chest any longer.
My stomach is twisted, and I need a heart that's stronger.
I know I'll hurt others if I take my life with my hands.
But I'm in too much pain with too many demands.
More than anything I miss the woman I want to be my wife.
But she wants to go on and find a different life. [comments] => 5 [counter] => 183 [topic] => 36 [informant] => rainbowtearz [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 0 [ratings] => 0 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => Suicide )

The End

Contributed by rainbowtearz on Friday, 25th June 2004 @ 08:24:38 PM in AEST
Topic: Suicide

Now I lay me down to die.
I take my life with one last sigh.
I just hope I find a better place than I know.
A better place for me to go.
I can't think of another method to make this go away.
So I tell everybody that I love them on my last day.
I can't take this feeling on my chest any longer.
My stomach is twisted, and I need a heart that's stronger.
I know I'll hurt others if I take my life with my hands.
But I'm in too much pain with too many demands.
More than anything I miss the woman I want to be my wife.
But she wants to go on and find a different life.

Copyright © rainbowtearz ... [ 2004-06-25 20:24:38]
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Re: The End (User Rating: 1 )
by imaginary on Friday, 25th June 2004 @ 08:33:58 PM AEST
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This poem makes me sad. It wiped the smile right off my face. Suicide is a sad topic though. Well written, and i hope to see you writing...if this is how you feel i hope you feel better...just because you cant think of another method doesn't mean there isn't one...please feel better soon.

Re: The End (User Rating: 1 )
by Trisha on Friday, 25th June 2004 @ 09:47:53 PM AEST
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I Am Sorry But This Is Sad You Need To Write About Something Different Happy Or Loved

Re: The End (User Rating: 1 )
by pixie on Saturday, 26th June 2004 @ 06:46:24 AM AEST
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very deep and sad poem....

pixie xx

Re: The End (User Rating: 1 )
by greeneyes on Saturday, 26th June 2004 @ 10:21:05 PM AEST
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Nothing like comeing right to the point, your heart is breaking for the love you have lost. As time goes by your heart will heal and a new love you will find, don't end your life, you have to much to live for. Prayers for streingth for you to move on.

Nancy

Re: The End (User Rating: 1 )
by deadbloodyrose on Saturday, 26th June 2004 @ 10:31:34 PM AEST
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i really liked this poem rach.. you did a nice job on it.. i think the comment that Trisha posted on here is bull*****.. not all poems are upbeat and happy.. poetry is an expression of yourself and your emitions if youre not happy at the time then youre prolly not gonna write a happy poem.. and since it was a depressing suicidal poem.. thats why it was in the SUICIDE section not happy poetry... you write some good poems rach i just wish that sara wasnt causing you all of this pain and bringing you down so much that you feel these thoughts.. you know i care rach and id be so depressed if anything happened to you.. your my sister no one can ever replace that.. take care *hugs u* AMI JO

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