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No help and no support!
Stressful memories.
Pesky little fleas.

Fist of flaming hell,
Fresh blood stains, starting to smell.
One add one makes two.
More victims bruises turning blue.

You become what you are.
You see your-self as “ROCK HARD”.
Because old back away,
They don’t come near!
They’re scared of you!
They’re full of fear…

Then some hard nuts,
Get hold of your thread.
And it’s clear,
That they want you dead!

But you just give it,
All you’ve got.
Until you die,
‘Coz you’ve been shot!
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Angry Thundered Thoughts...

Contributed by deathdrop on Friday, 25th June 2004 @ 11:33:23 AM in AEST
Topic: DarkPoetry

Angry thundered thoughts.
No help and no support!
Stressful memories.
Pesky little fleas.

Fist of flaming hell,
Fresh blood stains, starting to smell.
One add one makes two.
More victims bruises turning blue.

You become what you are.
You see your-self as “ROCK HARD”.
Because old back away,
They don’t come near!
They’re scared of you!
They’re full of fear…

Then some hard nuts,
Get hold of your thread.
And it’s clear,
That they want you dead!

But you just give it,
All you’ve got.
Until you die,
‘Coz you’ve been shot!

Copyright Â© deathdrop ... [ 2004-06-25 11:33:23]
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Re: Angry Thundered Thoughts... (User Rating: 1 )
by apollo on Friday, 25th June 2004 @ 11:37:45 AM AEST
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quite a rant i must say. this truly is angry at its finest. this was really compelling. a good write that is for sure.

brandon

Re: Angry Thundered Thoughts... (User Rating: 1 )
by pixie on Friday, 25th June 2004 @ 12:13:20 PM AEST
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nice and dark, anger is good when expressed in poetry

pixie xx

Re: Angry Thundered Thoughts... (User Rating: 1 )
by Naughtygurl on Friday, 25th June 2004 @ 01:33:47 PM AEST
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ummmm...... weird......

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