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Staring at the twinge,
It grew deeper when you appeared.
Wanting to find the little girl,
that once was steady,
Full of passion.
Days grew into years,
Slowly diminishing her dreams.
She ran into misguided affairs,
The passion disappeared.
I met you too late, longing to have faith,
Love wasn't enough, the little girl who's
envious truth,
was missing to guide me.
Glancing at my reflection,
is a woman now, older than most,
scorned yet recovered,
prepared to start over.
A tear falls down, as I smile,
the little girl was always near,
just lost in the rain, that slowly clears.
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Lost Passion

Contributed by lovespoetic0518 on Friday, 25th June 2004 @ 09:12:41 AM in AEST
Topic: LostLove

I see myself in this mirror,
Staring at the twinge,
It grew deeper when you appeared.
Wanting to find the little girl,
that once was steady,
Full of passion.
Days grew into years,
Slowly diminishing her dreams.
She ran into misguided affairs,
The passion disappeared.
I met you too late, longing to have faith,
Love wasn't enough, the little girl who's
envious truth,
was missing to guide me.
Glancing at my reflection,
is a woman now, older than most,
scorned yet recovered,
prepared to start over.
A tear falls down, as I smile,
the little girl was always near,
just lost in the rain, that slowly clears.

Copyright © lovespoetic0518 ... [ 2004-06-25 09:12:41]
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Re: Lost Passion (User Rating: 1 )
by Hurretje on Friday, 25th June 2004 @ 09:16:58 AM AEST
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Wonderful poem, sadness clad in powerful words and rich imagery.
Greetz,
Hur

Re: Lost Passion (User Rating: 1 )
by pixie on Friday, 25th June 2004 @ 10:49:28 AM AEST
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very emotional and sad, but greatly expressed......

pixie xx

Re: Lost Passion (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Friday, 25th June 2004 @ 11:27:17 AM AEST
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ooo... like this one, and identify with it to a certain extent.

Re: Lost Passion (User Rating: 1 )
by ladyfawn on Tuesday, 6th July 2004 @ 01:51:12 AM AEST
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vivid and great images, may you find the rainbow now:) hugs n' love nessa

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Re: Lost Passion (User Rating: 1 )
by RhythmBndt on Saturday, 7th August 2004 @ 08:51:08 AM AEST
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Beautiful poem :)

Re: Lost Passion (User Rating: 1 )
by xxbreathlessx on Sunday, 23rd July 2006 @ 09:18:34 PM AEST
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beautiful, refreshing and sad all at once. great write! and the ending was clever, i liked it, it shows hope.

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