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[bodytext] => they say once you hit the bottom, the only way is up how do you know when you've reached the bottom of the pit everyday gets worse, every thought more depressing, suicidal thought i'd hit the bottom, thought i'd be on my way up stil falling down, becoming darker, scarrier, more severe vines and branches scrape and cut my skin open. bleeding nobody with me throughout my fall, constantly all alone dont have anyone at the top, arm extended offering to help once i hit the bottok i may not retun to the top, surface possibly die on the way down, get hit on head by tree rock could fall from above crushing me, all of my hopes hungry snake at the bottom jaws open, sharp venemous teeth cant seem to reach out and grasp anything on the side wish i could hold onto it and atleast stay at that level get stabalized and pull myself up, climb to the top im stuck falling, cant find anyway to escape, get out nothing left to do, quit struggling let it all happen wheich everything as they fly by, they all leave they rise up as i fall down, my life is falling [comments] => 2 [counter] => 165 [topic] => 61 [informant] => deadbloodyrose [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 9 [ratings] => 2 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => selfstruggles )
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