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[aid] => mick
[title] => one
[time] => 2004-06-24 23:25:11
[hometext] => my feelings for one
[bodytext] => you know how I feel, you like the complementing words i reveal, only frienship i concede for love burns bright with my delight confusion sets in when you talk to him but you are not mine just in my lost and lonely mind but with time the wind will blow away my hate and wipe the slate clean. fear of being to late drives my ambition to be with you but how can it be when your the one who sees only a desperate child in me I will let you go and you will never know if i was the one.
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one
Contributed by
tangle
on
Thursday, 24th June 2004 @ 11:25:11 PM in AEST
Topic:
ApologyPoetry
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you know how I feel, you like the complementing words i reveal, only frienship i concede for love burns bright with my delight confusion sets in when you talk to him but you are not mine just in my lost and lonely mind but with time the wind will blow away my hate and wipe the slate clean. fear of being to late drives my ambition to be with you but how can it be when your the one who sees only a desperate child in me I will let you go and you will never know if i was the one.
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Re: one
(User Rating: 1 )
by Colleen on
Tuesday, 29th June 2004 @ 09:43:46 PM AEST
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| I really love this poem too! It's very sad however. |
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Re: one
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by emystar on
Friday, 9th July 2004 @ 06:46:56 AM AEST
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Sad but intersting thoughts etc.
I give u five stars.
luv, huggs,
emy |
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Re: one
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by emystar on
Wednesday, 1st September 2004 @ 03:26:31 AM AEST
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Sad but written like a pro.
Good work.
luv, huggs,
emy |
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