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Array ( [sid] => 53599 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => Blood [time] => 2004-06-24 23:21:02 [hometext] => [bodytext] => Burning candles surround me
My death aprroaching is all I see
It gleefully inches closer
Visions of death getting grosser
Blood on the ground
Blood all around
My face turning blue
Do I really scare you
Looking into the flame
Proves noone is to blame
Blood squirting into the air
Blood is everywhere
Do these visions scare you
Do they show everything I've been through
Life and death I have kissed
And they really do exist
Blood is in you and me
Blood is all I see [comments] => 2 [counter] => 170 [topic] => 13 [informant] => imlostbutloved69 [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 6 [ratings] => 2 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => DarkPoetry )
Blood

Contributed by imlostbutloved69 on Thursday, 24th June 2004 @ 11:21:02 PM in AEST
Topic: DarkPoetry



Burning candles surround me
My death aprroaching is all I see
It gleefully inches closer
Visions of death getting grosser
Blood on the ground
Blood all around
My face turning blue
Do I really scare you
Looking into the flame
Proves noone is to blame
Blood squirting into the air
Blood is everywhere
Do these visions scare you
Do they show everything I've been through
Life and death I have kissed
And they really do exist
Blood is in you and me
Blood is all I see




Copyright © imlostbutloved69 ... [ 2004-06-24 23:21:02]
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Re: Blood (User Rating: 1 )
by Essentially9 on Thursday, 24th June 2004 @ 11:49:52 PM AEST
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yup all that blood sickened me. well done.


Re: Blood (User Rating: 1 )
by deadbloodyrose on Friday, 25th June 2004 @ 12:49:38 AM AEST
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i love all the blood.. but i guess im a dark person *shrugs* meh.. i really liked it though.. its a very good write.. AMI JO




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