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Array ( [sid] => 53593 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => Inside the Outside [time] => 2004-06-24 23:05:36 [hometext] => This one is about that little bit of me that just wants to be popular, I just wanna know what it's like to be missed [bodytext] => I get so frustrated
And agitated
I just want to blow up
And beat up
Til I feel better
Til I feel normal
But it'll never be
Because I don't know what's normal
I don't know whats sane

I just want to break out
And be someone one else
Even if only for a day
What a day it would be not be be
Me
What a day it would be indeed
I would do opposite of everything I
normally do
Everything that makes me uptight
I would talk to girls
Be the center of attention
I would be one of the cool guys
That got the cool girls
And we would go to cool places
And do cool things
And at the end of the day
I would look in the mirror and say..
"what a day what a day, but it all fades away,
and the nothingness returns."
[comments] => 2 [counter] => 170 [topic] => 14 [informant] => slackoffsamiam [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 0 [ratings] => 0 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => DreamsandWishes )

Inside the Outside

Contributed by slackoffsamiam on Thursday, 24th June 2004 @ 11:05:36 PM in AEST
Topic: DreamsandWishes

I get so frustrated
And agitated
I just want to blow up
And beat up
Til I feel better
Til I feel normal
But it'll never be
Because I don't know what's normal
I don't know whats sane

I just want to break out
And be someone one else
Even if only for a day
What a day it would be not be be
Me
What a day it would be indeed
I would do opposite of everything I
normally do
Everything that makes me uptight
I would talk to girls
Be the center of attention
I would be one of the cool guys
That got the cool girls
And we would go to cool places
And do cool things
And at the end of the day
I would look in the mirror and say..
"what a day what a day, but it all fades away,
and the nothingness returns."

Copyright © slackoffsamiam ... [ 2004-06-24 23:05:36]
(Date/Time posted on site)

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Re: Inside the Outside (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Friday, 25th June 2004 @ 11:34:22 AM AEST
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Know how you feel. Most of us want to be outside ourselves once in a while - one of the things most human beings have in common. What makes a person happy is what makes them unique.

Re: Inside the Outside (User Rating: 1 )
by lovespoetic0518 on Friday, 25th June 2004 @ 04:17:00 PM AEST
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Everyone feels like this at some point in their lives. very well written, and I hope your torment fades away to where you are happy with who you are.

Kimberly

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