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Her face pale and white,

Her hair hangs wildly,
And her eyes look sad and tight.

If she dies tomorrow, next week or today,
Theres things she will regret,
And things that she should say.

Shes not afaraid to die,
But theres things she should of said,

But she didn't know how to voice them,
So she kept them in her head.

So if she doesn't see you,
She wants you to know,

You'll be in her heart forever and
Where ever she may go.

She looks into my eyes,
This girl who i call 'she,'

A tear falls down her cheek,
It's so easy to forget that this girl is really me.
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The Goodbye Note.....

Contributed by Living_In_My_Dream on Thursday, 24th June 2004 @ 10:31:07 PM in AEST
Topic: Suicide

She looks back at me,
Her face pale and white,

Her hair hangs wildly,
And her eyes look sad and tight.

If she dies tomorrow, next week or today,
Theres things she will regret,
And things that she should say.

Shes not afaraid to die,
But theres things she should of said,

But she didn't know how to voice them,
So she kept them in her head.

So if she doesn't see you,
She wants you to know,

You'll be in her heart forever and
Where ever she may go.

She looks into my eyes,
This girl who i call 'she,'

A tear falls down her cheek,
It's so easy to forget that this girl is really me.

Copyright © Living_In_My_Dream ... [ 2004-06-24 22:31:07]
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Re: The Goodbye Note..... (User Rating: 1 )
by betty on Thursday, 24th June 2004 @ 11:00:46 PM AEST
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Good poem.
You should just speak your mind all the time- it is loads of fun (but beware- people may dislike you or call you crazy)
-betty

Re: The Goodbye Note..... (User Rating: 1 )
by xSlashXPrettyXSkinx on Friday, 25th June 2004 @ 05:26:11 AM AEST
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LIMD... This is a wonderfully written poem. But so sad. I am sorry you feel this way. If you ever need anyone to talk to, please never hesitate to PM me. We all need someone sometimes just to listen. :) Thank you for sharing this. So much emotion. I am feeling about the same.

Lindsey

Re: The Goodbye Note..... (User Rating: 1 )
by BrandySwanson on Friday, 25th June 2004 @ 05:57:21 AM AEST
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great poem but very emotional and sad at the same time. hope your ok? great job.

Brandy

Re: The Goodbye Note..... (User Rating: 1 )
by pixie on Friday, 25th June 2004 @ 06:30:49 AM AEST
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very powerful piece

pixie xx

Re: The Goodbye Note..... (User Rating: 1 )
by bobotheclown on Friday, 25th June 2004 @ 01:42:32 PM AEST
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this was very sad very emotionally and well written. You captured the feeling of loneliness very well I thought.

Bobo (Joel)

Re: The Goodbye Note..... (User Rating: 1 )
by deadbloodyrose on Sunday, 27th June 2004 @ 01:05:45 AM AEST
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very touching.. emotional..powerful.. amazing.. wonderfully written.. i could see you standing in pain before my eyes cuz u painted this poem so vividly.. AMI JO

Re: The Goodbye Note..... (User Rating: 1 )
by NoahsARK on Tuesday, 6th July 2004 @ 09:39:21 PM AEST
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I love how you express yourself and how you say and tell how you feel I like this poem alot!
Anita

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