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Array ( [sid] => 53578 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => Touched [time] => 2004-06-24 21:19:09 [hometext] => I wrote this four days after I met him. 3-29-04 [bodytext] => I think about you
And all that you've done
To change my view
With your soft spoken tongue.

Never before
Have I admired another
The way I do you,
My friend, my brother.

There is a part
Inside of my soul
That you've touched,
More than you'll know.

You give me a hope
That I never knew,
And slowly I mold
Into something new.

A woman of God,
Who is ran by desire
To serve the Lord
With an unsquelching fire.

If that weren't enough,
You sprinkle on more,
You showed me true love,
Now it is you I adore.

Yet, I will wait
As I've never before.
I'll wait for your love
For without it I'm poor.

I will keep quiet
And my passion concealed
Until it is time
For it to be revealed.

I cannot deny it
That distinctive pull,
The connection that brought you
Deep into my soul.

Heart to heart,
We whisper in peace,
Around the warm fire,
Amidst the strong trees.

Thank you for changing
Who I've become
By making me whole
Now to God I succumb.

Never stop living
Or loving to live.
Continue your faith,
And to God do all give. [comments] => 4 [counter] => 220 [topic] => 2 [informant] => eatfresh22 [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 20 [ratings] => 4 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => LovePoetry )
Touched

Contributed by eatfresh22 on Thursday, 24th June 2004 @ 09:19:09 PM in AEST
Topic: LovePoetry



I think about you
And all that you've done
To change my view
With your soft spoken tongue.

Never before
Have I admired another
The way I do you,
My friend, my brother.

There is a part
Inside of my soul
That you've touched,
More than you'll know.

You give me a hope
That I never knew,
And slowly I mold
Into something new.

A woman of God,
Who is ran by desire
To serve the Lord
With an unsquelching fire.

If that weren't enough,
You sprinkle on more,
You showed me true love,
Now it is you I adore.

Yet, I will wait
As I've never before.
I'll wait for your love
For without it I'm poor.

I will keep quiet
And my passion concealed
Until it is time
For it to be revealed.

I cannot deny it
That distinctive pull,
The connection that brought you
Deep into my soul.

Heart to heart,
We whisper in peace,
Around the warm fire,
Amidst the strong trees.

Thank you for changing
Who I've become
By making me whole
Now to God I succumb.

Never stop living
Or loving to live.
Continue your faith,
And to God do all give.




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Re: Touched (User Rating: 1 )
by HellsLibrarian on Thursday, 24th June 2004 @ 09:31:14 PM AEST
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Your faith is very apparent. So is your talent. Just one question, though- is unsquelching a word?


Re: Touched (User Rating: 1 )
by Wachumiri on Monday, 28th June 2004 @ 09:46:59 PM AEST
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Wow... that's good, really good, Carrie. Thanks.
Take care.
David


Re: Touched (User Rating: 1 )
by Fionndruinne on Tuesday, 29th June 2004 @ 08:26:13 PM AEST
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Beautiful and touching... the picture of a true heart. I think he probably appreciates it...

Well done, meldë.
Namárië for now.
Andrew


Re: Touched (User Rating: 1 )
by faith_my_eyes on Thursday, 1st July 2004 @ 03:48:28 PM AEST
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This a lovely poem, pure and sincere in its admirtation for your object of affection and reverence to God. Good job.




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