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The hate stings
The anger bleeds
The emotion
Wrought by thee

With this hate
I shall see
What will be
The ending

The hate stings
The anger bleeds
My eyes weep
From the wounds
You have inflicted
Done with intent
What you wrought
Has seeded
What is to be

The wounds
You have inflicted
Will never heal
You never leave them alone
Reopening what has closed
To bleed me
To weaken me
To take me
Your purpose
Is to kill me
Unintentionally
To let me kill myself
From what I feel
To let my kill myself
Because of what you said
Because of you I bled

The hate burns
The anger sears
What you did
Can't be conceived
The emotion
Wrought by thee
Is killing me
Fulfilling its intent [comments] => 3 [counter] => 164 [topic] => 13 [informant] => essentially9 [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 14 [ratings] => 3 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => DarkPoetry )

Unintentionally Killing Me

Contributed by essentially9 on Thursday, 24th June 2004 @ 08:50:21 PM in AEST
Topic: DarkPoetry

Unintentionally Killing Me

The hate stings
The anger bleeds
The emotion
Wrought by thee

With this hate
I shall see
What will be
The ending

The hate stings
The anger bleeds
My eyes weep
From the wounds
You have inflicted
Done with intent
What you wrought
Has seeded
What is to be

The wounds
You have inflicted
Will never heal
You never leave them alone
Reopening what has closed
To bleed me
To weaken me
To take me
Your purpose
Is to kill me
Unintentionally
To let me kill myself
From what I feel
To let my kill myself
Because of what you said
Because of you I bled

The hate burns
The anger sears
What you did
Can't be conceived
The emotion
Wrought by thee
Is killing me
Fulfilling its intent

Copyright © essentially9 ... [ 2004-06-24 20:50:21]
(Date/Time posted on site)

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Re: Unintentionally Killing Me (User Rating: 1 )
by pixie on Thursday, 24th June 2004 @ 09:12:36 PM AEST
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wow, very powerful poem,

pixie xx

Re: Unintentionally Killing Me (User Rating: 1 )
by HellsLibrarian on Thursday, 24th June 2004 @ 09:17:53 PM AEST
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My only thought is wow. I love the idiom you used.

Re: Unintentionally Killing Me (User Rating: 1 )
by arden on Thursday, 24th June 2004 @ 09:26:31 PM AEST
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wow..this was really powerful. i love the way you wrote it. very nice flow to it. a great dark chilling poem.
i liked it.
5 stars.
Arden

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