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MASTERPIECE
Contributed by
uniquepoet33
on
Monday, 21st October 2002 @ 08:30:00 AM in AEST
Topic:
LovePoetry
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YOUR OUTER BEAUTY WAS QUITE BREATH
TAKING, WHICH I NOTICED IN THE PAST
THEN IT WAS A WHILE BEFORE I NOTICED
THAT THE BEAUTY STILL SEEMED TO LAST.
ALL THE FEATURES COMPLIMENTED THE OTHERS AND EXPRESSED A CONCERN FOR LIFE
I REALIZED THEN WHAT MY EYES BEHELD
I NEVER WANTED FROM SIGHT,
I LOOKED INTO THE EYES QUITE CLOSELY AND NOTICED THE HYPNOTIC CHARM
THE LIPS NEVER MOVED
BUT YOUR EYES SEEMED TO STATE
THAT I MEANT NO HARM
THEN AS IF TO OPEN UP INSIDE
I SAW THE BEAUTY THAT HAS BEEN
APPARENTLY HIDDEN
YOU HAVE UPLIFTED MY SPIRITS AND TOOK MY EMOTIONS ON A JOURNEY
A JOURNEY THAT I HAVE NEVER RIDDEN
AFTER THIS EXPEREINCE
LIFE HAS PAINTED A PORTRAIT SO WONDERFUL AND NEW
THIS PORTRAIT IS A MASTERPIECE
THAT BELONGS TO ME
AND THAT MASTERPIECE I HOPE TO SOMEDAY HAVE IS YOU
Copyright ©
uniquepoet33
... [
2002-10-21 08:30:00] (Date/Time posted on
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Re: MASTERPIECE
(User Rating: 1 ) by Sexygirl on
Monday, 21st October 2002 @ 09:40:34 AM AEST (User
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That is really sweet....I like that..... |
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Re: MASTERPIECE
(User Rating: 1 ) by LOWMAN613 on
Monday, 21st October 2002 @ 12:20:56 PM AEST (User
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Nicely done,I enjoyed reading this. Christina |
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Re: MASTERPIECE
(User Rating: 1 ) by Lia on
Monday, 21st October 2002 @ 01:56:05 PM AEST (User
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And what a beautiful masterpiece it is |
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