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Array ( [sid] => 53526 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => Could You Be Me? [time] => 2004-06-24 14:16:33 [hometext] => This poem is about a real life person and event. This is to make you remember that, just b/c you think you can hide what you're doing, others can see what is happening. [bodytext] => It happens when youre all alone
When theres not a sound or a tone
The emotions that come over you
They may be many or a few

You think about the happy days
When the love you felt
Went both ways
When you both shared that lovers gaze
But now thats all gone

You thought there would never be another
That you were his only lover
Until he found her

Now theres no medicene that can cure
The pain that you endure
And now you want to fight
Kick and scream and bite

This happens through out the night
Till the tears blure your sight
Then the light comes soo bright
And you see what really happened

You had a major problem
That is
Until you got em
Yes
It made you sick
And it was only a little nick
But others could see the truth

You thought you had no friends
That drugs were it
But that was then

You liked to cut
So you could hide in your gut
All the pain and all the hell
Because you thought you could not tell
The ones who loved you most

Then
When you could finally see
The person youd turned out to be
When you realized you needed help
It felt like being hit with a belt
But the damage had been done

Now youve been ostrasized
Stared at by glaring eyes
Feeling hopeless and despised
But it didn't have to be

So now youre clean and sober
You have the chance to start over

So
To all those poeple
Whose heart you had broken
And friendships you revoked
You say this solem prayer

' I hope lifes better, when Im not there.'

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Could You Be Me?

Contributed by PunkRocker494 on Thursday, 24th June 2004 @ 02:16:33 PM in AEST
Topic: drugabuse



It happens when youre all alone
When theres not a sound or a tone
The emotions that come over you
They may be many or a few

You think about the happy days
When the love you felt
Went both ways
When you both shared that lovers gaze
But now thats all gone

You thought there would never be another
That you were his only lover
Until he found her

Now theres no medicene that can cure
The pain that you endure
And now you want to fight
Kick and scream and bite

This happens through out the night
Till the tears blure your sight
Then the light comes soo bright
And you see what really happened

You had a major problem
That is
Until you got em
Yes
It made you sick
And it was only a little nick
But others could see the truth

You thought you had no friends
That drugs were it
But that was then

You liked to cut
So you could hide in your gut
All the pain and all the hell
Because you thought you could not tell
The ones who loved you most

Then
When you could finally see
The person youd turned out to be
When you realized you needed help
It felt like being hit with a belt
But the damage had been done

Now youve been ostrasized
Stared at by glaring eyes
Feeling hopeless and despised
But it didn't have to be

So now youre clean and sober
You have the chance to start over

So
To all those poeple
Whose heart you had broken
And friendships you revoked
You say this solem prayer

' I hope lifes better, when Im not there.'





Copyright © PunkRocker494 ... [ 2004-06-24 14:16:33]
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Re: Could You Be Me? (User Rating: 1 )
by Living_In_My_Dream on Thursday, 24th June 2004 @ 02:39:09 PM AEST
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wow, that was an intruiging write very powerful keep it up and keep it coming...

much love,
Dani


Re: Could You Be Me? (User Rating: 1 )
by Pyrofungus on Thursday, 24th June 2004 @ 03:01:54 PM AEST
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wow this is incredible! It really made me think about my life and what I was doing and how I'm trying to quit...I slipped up a few days ago but I'm really trying!
Thank you for this wonderful poem

Please comment on my work too
Summer




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