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Array ( [sid] => 53466 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => THe VoiCe [time] => 2004-06-24 03:24:05 [hometext] => I have met the most wonderful guy. Strangely it was at a gas station. We talked for a while and then went to his house and hung out all day, and then we've been doing a lot of talking since. I'm feeling really good about this guy. Quote are from him. [bodytext] => "I've been doing some thinking,"
The voice replied to the silence-
"Alittle about you-"
Trembling it continued, through the wires.-

"You make me smile"
"And you're so real"
As he stopped to collect his thoughts-
And the voice goes on-
"You're so open; like a book,"
"I can't explain it; you're just you."

So I sit in quiet wonder on the phone
Line gone dead, the voice is gone
Echoing through my mind
The reverberations of a man who's kind.

"So, tomorrow, what do you want to do?"
"I mean, it's enough for me, just to be with you."
And the voice causes sudden chills
Throughout my body it never stills.

"I believe in love and faith. Hope and life. I believe two people merge ideals to build up trust. Thats when they fall in love, after they make is all one."

Thats when the voice...created... LOVE.

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THe VoiCe

Contributed by xslashxprettyxskinx on Thursday, 24th June 2004 @ 03:24:05 AM in AEST
Topic: FriendshipPoetry

"I've been doing some thinking,"
The voice replied to the silence-
"Alittle about you-"
Trembling it continued, through the wires.-

"You make me smile"
"And you're so real"
As he stopped to collect his thoughts-
And the voice goes on-
"You're so open; like a book,"
"I can't explain it; you're just you."

So I sit in quiet wonder on the phone
Line gone dead, the voice is gone
Echoing through my mind
The reverberations of a man who's kind.

"So, tomorrow, what do you want to do?"
"I mean, it's enough for me, just to be with you."
And the voice causes sudden chills
Throughout my body it never stills.

"I believe in love and faith. Hope and life. I believe two people merge ideals to build up trust. Thats when they fall in love, after they make is all one."

Thats when the voice...created... LOVE.

Copyright © xslashxprettyxskinx ... [ 2004-06-24 03:24:05]
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Re: THe VoiCe (User Rating: 1 )
by Living_In_My_Dream on Thursday, 24th June 2004 @ 03:45:26 AM AEST
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wow this was definatly a breathtaking write very captivating I enjoyed it a lot keep it up please never let your talent go to waste...I enjoy it to much lol beautiful!!!!

much love,
Dani

Re: THe VoiCe (User Rating: 1 )
by pixie on Thursday, 24th June 2004 @ 05:55:18 AM AEST
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great write , very sweet and beautiful....

pixie xx

Re: THe VoiCe (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Thursday, 24th June 2004 @ 07:37:30 AM AEST
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OMG, this is so great. Lindsey, I hope it is a very special relationship for you. Love can change everything in your life. Make you want to live each day to the fullest. Enjoy and cherish. Who knows, he could be just what you need. I hope so.

Hugs,
Rita

Re: THe VoiCe (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Thursday, 24th June 2004 @ 08:11:39 AM AEST
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very interesting write, and romance -

Re: THe VoiCe (User Rating: 1 )
by ShadowDaughter on Thursday, 24th June 2004 @ 11:13:11 AM AEST
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Beautiful write, Lindsey, and on a beautiful subject . . . he sounds great for you, from what you've told me of him :), and I truly hope you two find happiness and lots of it, 'cause YOU DESERVE IT. It takes a lot to learn to trust, have faith, and love again . . . but the outcomes of doing so can be wonderful. *hugs* Hope ya find everything you want in life, Lindsey.

--Nora

Re: THe VoiCe (User Rating: 1 )
by ladyfawn on Thursday, 24th June 2004 @ 11:54:27 AM AEST
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awww!! so sweet:) im so happy for you lindsey! hugs n' love nessa

@->>->:-

Re: THe VoiCe (User Rating: 1 )
by Vitreous_Soul on Thursday, 24th June 2004 @ 06:54:51 PM AEST
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Wow, this is superb. I like the way you meshed his quotes, and what you were thinking at each moment. Such a unique approach. Also, it's very polished and reads very smoothly. Very, very well done, and hey--I feel good about you two as well!

Crushed by a random falling piano,
-V.S. ( 090404 )

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