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Array ( [sid] => 53459 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => Without You [time] => 2004-06-24 02:07:57 [hometext] => I wrote this anticipating the departure of my girlfriend, knowing it would be over soon would prove to be the hardest thing. [bodytext] => It's hard to imagine a life without you
It's hard to wake up in these dreams which were through
I'm waiting, holding close to my phone
I want you to call I hate being alone
Magazine's, songs and the show's on tv,
they all display love, and reminds me I need.
These thoughts consume my aching head,
at stake are emotions on a bet
That you'll be with me,
or you will become my toughest defeat.
There you are, heaven sent,
walking so fast that I can't take your hint.
Will you stay tonight,
right at my side like it's the last day of my fast paced life
Here I am, I can't wait to die,
but only if it means you'll be mine [comments] => 2 [counter] => 175 [topic] => 48 [informant] => WakeNsnoWboarder [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 0 [ratings] => 0 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => EmotionalPoetry )

Without You

Contributed by WakeNsnoWboarder on Thursday, 24th June 2004 @ 02:07:57 AM in AEST
Topic: EmotionalPoetry

It's hard to imagine a life without you
It's hard to wake up in these dreams which were through
I'm waiting, holding close to my phone
I want you to call I hate being alone
Magazine's, songs and the show's on tv,
they all display love, and reminds me I need.
These thoughts consume my aching head,
at stake are emotions on a bet
That you'll be with me,
or you will become my toughest defeat.
There you are, heaven sent,
walking so fast that I can't take your hint.
Will you stay tonight,
right at my side like it's the last day of my fast paced life
Here I am, I can't wait to die,
but only if it means you'll be mine

Copyright © WakeNsnoWboarder ... [ 2004-06-24 02:07:57]
(Date/Time posted on site)

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Re: Without You (User Rating: 1 )
by Living_In_My_Dream on Thursday, 24th June 2004 @ 03:33:14 AM AEST
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I liked this a lot it was a sad beautiful emotional write...I liked it a lot...

much love,
Dani

Re: Without You (User Rating: 1 )
by pixie on Thursday, 24th June 2004 @ 05:58:53 AM AEST
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a great emotional write, keep it up

pixie xx

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