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Dancing In Emptiness
Contributed by
blueheart
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Wednesday, 23rd June 2004 @ 09:47:48 PM in AEST
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Do I savor the silence that lingers,
And abide in it with gracious eyes,
Or shall I resent the unwanted solitude,
And dwell in my own spiteful replies.
Should I dance alone in this emptiness,
Rejuvenating my mind as I muse,
Or shall I sink in scenes of hopelessness,
Happiness will exist based on what I choose.
A positive mind exudes great hope.
A negative thought burns the soul.
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blueheart
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Re: Dancing In Emptiness
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by ladyfawn on
Wednesday, 23rd June 2004 @ 09:53:49 PM AEST
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oh, very true, im with you in the beginning of each stanza, hanna, a deep and thought provoking poem, this is truely beautiful:) hugs n' love nessa
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Re: Dancing In Emptiness
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by Former_Member on
Wednesday, 23rd June 2004 @ 09:59:41 PM AEST
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Always go for the positive, my friend. The ions are much kinder spiritually, physically and mentally. Use the silence as a time to grow within yourself and learn who and what you are so that you will be a stronger person when life is not so quiet.
Rita |
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Re: Dancing In Emptiness
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by shelby on
Wednesday, 23rd June 2004 @ 10:06:43 PM AEST
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so very well done:)
Michelle |
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Re: Dancing In Emptiness
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by venkat on
Thursday, 24th June 2004 @ 04:02:27 AM AEST
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| Great conclusion. venkat |
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Re: Dancing In Emptiness
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by pixie on
Thursday, 24th June 2004 @ 06:45:02 AM AEST
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great poem,....
pixie xx |
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Re: Dancing In Emptiness
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by Hurretje on
Friday, 25th June 2004 @ 06:44:22 AM AEST
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This is ever so wise and true! Do you consider life to be a half empty or a half full glass of water?
I loved reading it!
Hugs,
Hur |
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Re: Dancing In Emptiness
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by Justalady on
Saturday, 26th June 2004 @ 04:15:07 PM AEST
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| A negative thought burns the soul. What a powerful message! You've done well with this blueheart. Thanks, I needed this message at this time. June |
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Re: Dancing In Emptiness
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by RobertKilpatrick on
Saturday, 10th July 2004 @ 03:22:51 AM AEST
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| A muse you are; Great use of the word.... |
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Re: Dancing In Emptiness
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by deadreckoning1983 on
Monday, 16th August 2004 @ 11:21:03 PM AEST
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| this was a very good poem. i love this "poets society" we have i heard about you by word of mouth so to speak. and now i have another poetess i will continue to read. good poem can't wait to read more. |
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Re: Dancing In Emptiness
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by wray on
Thursday, 6th January 2005 @ 04:16:27 AM AEST
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| It's interesting that you perceive life's emptiness irregardless of positive/negative attitude. But I like the way you can beautify that emptiness which is such a common source of despair for most people. Awesome poem, I love your take on the situation. |
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