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Array ( [sid] => 5342 [catid] => 1 [aid] => Mick [title] => A Hidden Face [time] => 2002-10-20 17:00:00 [hometext] => What compells a person to be the way they are? What fun draws someone away? What promise of lust has someone drawing near? What things shall we always fear? [bodytext] => I awoke that morning and death was kneeling by my side. He told me that I was his friend and in that day I would choose my fate. He wrapped his arms around me and just let me think. I could smell the age in his coat. His blade was sharp and close to me skin, I told him these things. He stripped off his robe and dropped the deathly tool, thats when he became the one I love. The face of a tender boy in love lurks behind that horrid mask. and a rouch gentler that the softest breeze. Then suddenly its 3am and he sneaks into his job again, and I am afraid of loosing him. So I swallow my fear and do what is necessary...to follow him...into the darkness. [comments] => 5 [counter] => 288 [topic] => 43 [informant] => DreamsOfDark [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 10 [ratings] => 2 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => oops )
A Hidden Face

Contributed by DreamsOfDark on Sunday, 20th October 2002 @ 05:00:00 PM in AEST
Topic: oops



I awoke that morning and death was kneeling by my side. He told me that I was his friend and in that day I would choose my fate. He wrapped his arms around me and just let me think. I could smell the age in his coat. His blade was sharp and close to me skin, I told him these things. He stripped off his robe and dropped the deathly tool, thats when he became the one I love. The face of a tender boy in love lurks behind that horrid mask. and a rouch gentler that the softest breeze. Then suddenly its 3am and he sneaks into his job again, and I am afraid of loosing him. So I swallow my fear and do what is necessary...to follow him...into the darkness.




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Re: A Hidden Face (User Rating: 1 )
by pam on Thursday, 24th October 2002 @ 03:45:31 PM AEST
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wow. Honestly, I think that this write is amazing. I understand this feeling completely although perhaps in a somewhat different way. I guess we'll never know. Keep up the great writing!


Re: A Hidden Face (User Rating: 1 )
by SapphireAngel on Wednesday, 6th November 2002 @ 01:44:33 PM AEST
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Interesting write. I like it though, shows truth in pain.


Re: A Hidden Face (User Rating: 1 )
by TundraHydra on Monday, 20th January 2003 @ 03:16:07 PM AEST
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this is a poem that people can relate to and everyone needs a poem like that, plus I love this poet, shes a great person


Re: A Hidden Face (User Rating: 0 )
by Former_Member on Monday, 20th January 2003 @ 10:48:13 PM AEST
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*Blushes* You flatter me far to much.


Re: A Hidden Face (User Rating: 1 )
by Sk8er909 on Monday, 28th April 2003 @ 05:00:47 PM AEST
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I really like your poems this one the most.you are a very good poet




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